Open Poetry #5 |
Thinking we're Together |
minime New Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 8 |
The moon is bright o what a night To sit and think of all thats right To think of you and to think of me To think of what we could be To think of all that we could do Together forever just me and you To think of how we could grow And with each other there is a lot to know A lot to see a lot to do A lot of stuff for me and you It would keep us busy throughout the years As we laugh and sing and shed our tears And as I sit under the moon I hope and pray you will come soon. dedicated to Courtney!! |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I hope Courtney knows what a romantic you are minime. This is so sweet! -SEA |
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poetry_kills Senior Member
since 1999-12-04
Posts 549new orleans |
minime: very good job i'm not usually a fan of short verses, but you do a good job here and pull it off quite nicely if i do say so myself... sincerely, jerome the boy with no corndog A savage place! as holy and enchanted As e'er beneath a waning moon was haunted By woman wailing for her demon-lover! ~Coleridge |
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minime New Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 8 |
she has commented on how she thinks that I am pretty romantic and how she wishes more guys would take it upon themselves to be romantic without the girl telling them to be |
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minime New Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 8 |
and also forgot to say thank you very much for the nice comments |
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Beri Member
since 1999-11-25
Posts 149 |
How romantically sweet! Courtney was right minime! I loved it. And yes it would be nice for more guys to be romantic on their own. I have come across a few who are, but then there are alot of the ones that need to be told of romance. But after reading this, I think you do have that aspect all under control! Well done. If you love something, set it free, if it comes back to you, its meant to be... |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Think you got the romance part down pat |
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Koon Junior Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 43Singapore |
You make all males proud!!! Now they know that we can be romantic too.... |
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