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Ahh, The Game Of Love
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Ahh, The Game Of Love |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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Do you see me looking at you What's next? What should I do? Wave- Now wink, it's part of the game But hey- What is his name? Smile- say hi Wait- Who is this guy? Who is he? What should I do? He's so handsome I haven't a clue! -SEA- *I wrote this just for fun  |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
 And it shows. Brought a smile to my face, anyway! I love work as unpretentious and simply out for a good time as this. Many times, people take themselves way to seriously, and mistake their art for Art. One capitalization does not make any significant change. (that's why I always lower-case my poems; to remind myself that no matter how great I think the words I've paired together are, they're merely words, not life. even the most expressive writing in the world fails actual reality). Thanks for sharing.Mike |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Mike.....glad to give you a smile! I'm glad you liked it. -SEA |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
So this is how it's done huh??? LOL! Cute poem SEA! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA- This is an adorably flirtatious piece. Spontaneity is fun ! So is flirting ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Laurel Junior Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 22 |
This shows the fun you had in writing it! I like it, Sea! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is a cute one, SEA! I love it!! |
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