Open Poetry #5 |
Feelings of Beauty |
JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
feelings of beauty Something got me thinking about Ann again. Her tender lips on mine. A soft kiss so sweet so sublime. A warm moment in my past now desiring and wanting a future to last. And so, my feelings of beauty will be a fresh kiss on Ann's sweet lips for me. Will these feelings stir up and inspire passion or will my heart lose her all this beauty forsaken? Jameslee@Jan25,2000 A womans beauty, is nothing but the sum of the fulfilment of all the desires you have been able to formulate about her..Stendhals book about Love..1822 |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Very very nice... 'Writing sharpens life; life enriches writing' Sylvia Plath |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Beautiful sentiments James, you see beauty in a lot of forms.. open your eyes wider and write me a poem about some other beauty you saw today. Please ? Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely. ~Isis~ (Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Yes, this is beautiful! Denise |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Severn I very, very much appreciate your nice comment. Thank you Isis you made me feel good. I am working on a poem about a light show and yes it was....beautiful. I'm having a hard time expressing the feelings I experienced while watching this beautiful explosion of light. Thank you Denise for your nice comments. Its nice to be appreciated. James |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Memories are a wonderful thing, as long as we don't dwell too long on them I can live with the idea That we are merely actors Playing a part But I do wish Whoever is writing my script Would learn to use A few more Happy Endings ~Javan |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Hi Hoot Owl, Thank you for reading my poem. I agree with you about memories. I met Ann about one month ago and I kissed her less than one week ago and I'm going easy with Ann. When I think about the women I know Ann is always right in front of me. I think a lot of this is because she is such a new friend and I will settle down in a little bit. James |
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