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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2000-01-26 07:53 PM


feelings of beauty

Something got me thinking about Ann again.
Her tender lips on mine.
A soft kiss so sweet so sublime.
A warm moment in my past
now desiring and wanting a future to last.
And so, my feelings of beauty  will be
a fresh kiss on Ann's sweet lips for me.
Will these feelings stir up and inspire passion
or will my heart lose her all this beauty forsaken?

Jameslee@Jan25,2000

A womans beauty, is nothing but the sum of the fulfilment of all the desires you have been able to formulate about her..Stendhals book about Love..1822



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Severn
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1 posted 2000-01-26 07:57 PM


Very very nice...



 'Writing sharpens life;
life enriches writing'
Sylvia Plath

Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
2 posted 2000-01-26 11:48 PM


Beautiful sentiments James, you see beauty in a lot of forms.. open your eyes wider and write me a poem about some other beauty you saw today.  Please ?  

 Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely.
~Isis~
(Sovereign of the Spirit)



Denise
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3 posted 2000-01-26 11:51 PM


Yes, this is beautiful!

Denise

JamesMichael
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4 posted 2000-01-27 05:50 AM


Thank you Severn I very, very much appreciate your nice comment.
Thank you Isis you made me feel good.  I am working on a poem about a light show and yes it was....beautiful.  I'm having a hard time expressing the feelings I experienced while watching this beautiful explosion of light.
Thank you Denise for your nice comments. Its nice to be appreciated.
James

hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05
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5 posted 2000-01-27 10:39 AM


Memories are a wonderful thing, as long as we don't dwell too long on them  

 I can live with the idea
That we are merely actors
Playing a part
But I do wish
Whoever is writing my script
Would learn to use
A few more Happy Endings
~Javan

JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
6 posted 2000-01-27 05:20 PM


Hi Hoot Owl,
Thank you for reading my poem.  I agree with you about memories.   I met Ann about one month ago and I kissed her less than one week ago and I'm going easy with Ann.  When I think about the women I know Ann is always right in front of me.   I think a lot of this is because she is such a new friend and I will settle down in a little bit.  James

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