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My Amazing Jamie Dawn (a poem for my love)
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My Amazing Jamie Dawn (a poem for my love) |
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rychard New Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2Perth , Australia |
MY AMAZING JAMIE DAWN Named for the dawn, the first time I met you the sun came out Banishing the darkness from my soul, lighting the way forward Bringing hope and happiness, where before only desolation Setting my heart aflame, melting my resolve to exist alone Your beauty breathtaking, your hair spun gold, framing the face of an angel Your eyes a bottomless blue, piercing the very heart of me Your smile a sparkling diamond white, showing complete acceptance Framed by lips of ruby red, so passionate, so soft and yielding Your voice a salve for my soul, in it I hear nothing but love The body of a goddess, lush and ripe, the taste of honey Arms that hold me tight, quieten my fears, a safe refuge Your back strong and straight, shouldering my troubles Your love for me, so strong and true, unconditional, without expectations Showing me to be someone I am proud of, someone worthy of love Your love erasing the past hurt, bringing me back to the land of the living Encouraging me to love again, to trust again, making me feel like a man My love grows every day, consuming my every moment, my every thought Will still love you as the last star winks out and the whole world is dark and cold Then my love for you will truly shine, a beacon in the darkness, brilliant and pure Lighting our way forward, you by my side as you belong. Together forever |
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One Who Understands Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 251Cedar Rapids, Iowa |
Absolutaly beautiful  Wonderful description of your love! |
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Laurel Junior Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 22 |
Poems about love are the best! This is one of the best of the best! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
I think you are in love |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful! Simply beautiful! Denise |
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