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rychard
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since 2000-01-25
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Perth , Australia

0 posted 2000-01-25 11:03 PM


MY AMAZING JAMIE DAWN

Named for the dawn, the first time I met you the sun came out
Banishing the darkness from my soul, lighting the way forward
Bringing hope and happiness, where before only desolation
Setting my heart aflame, melting my resolve to exist alone

Your beauty breathtaking, your hair spun gold, framing the face of an angel
Your eyes a bottomless blue, piercing the very heart of me
Your smile a sparkling diamond white, showing complete acceptance
Framed by lips of ruby red, so passionate, so soft and yielding

Your voice a salve for my soul, in it I hear nothing but love
The body of a goddess, lush and ripe, the taste of honey
Arms that hold me tight, quieten my fears, a safe refuge
Your back strong and straight, shouldering my troubles

Your love for me, so strong and true, unconditional, without expectations
Showing me to be someone I am proud of, someone worthy of love
Your love erasing the past hurt, bringing me back to the land of the living
Encouraging me to love again, to trust again, making me feel like a man

My love grows every day, consuming my every moment, my every thought
Will still love you as the last star winks out and the whole world is dark and cold
Then my love for you will truly shine, a beacon in the darkness, brilliant and pure
Lighting our way forward, you by my side as you belong. Together forever



© Copyright 2000 Richard Anthony Arancelovic - All Rights Reserved
One Who Understands
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since 2000-01-20
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Cedar Rapids, Iowa
1 posted 2000-01-25 11:43 PM


Absolutaly beautiful

Wonderful description of your love!

Laurel
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since 2000-02-01
Posts 22

2 posted 2000-02-04 01:28 PM


Poems about love are the best! This is one of the best of the best!
hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05
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Glen Hope, PA USA
3 posted 2000-02-04 01:33 PM


I think you are in love  
Denise
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4 posted 2000-02-04 02:52 PM


Very beautiful! Simply beautiful!

Denise

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