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My Amazing Jamie Dawn (a poem for my love)
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My Amazing Jamie Dawn (a poem for my love) |
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rychard New Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2Perth , Australia |
MY AMAZING JAMIE DAWN Named for the dawn, the first time I met you the sun came out Banishing the darkness from my soul, lighting the way forward Bringing hope and happiness, where before only desolation Setting my heart aflame, melting my resolve to exist alone Your beauty breathtaking, your hair spun gold, framing the face of an angel Your eyes a bottomless blue, piercing the very heart of me Your smile a sparkling diamond white, showing complete acceptance Framed by lips of ruby red, so passionate, so soft and yielding Your voice a salve for my soul, in it I hear nothing but love The body of a goddess, lush and ripe, the taste of honey Arms that hold me tight, quieten my fears, a safe refuge Your back strong and straight, shouldering my troubles Your love for me, so strong and true, unconditional, without expectations Showing me to be someone I am proud of, someone worthy of love Your love erasing the past hurt, bringing me back to the land of the living Encouraging me to love again, to trust again, making me feel like a man My love grows every day, consuming my every moment, my every thought Will still love you as the last star winks out and the whole world is dark and cold Then my love for you will truly shine, a beacon in the darkness, brilliant and pure Lighting our way forward, you by my side as you belong. Together forever |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Rychard- Welcome to Passion's. This is a beautiful statement of love. The love is evident in each and every line. Thank you for sharing it with us. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
This is a wonderful tribute to Jamie Dawn... We welcome you to Passions and look forward to reading more of your work... Check your email for something special [This message has been edited by Nan (edited 01-26-2000).] |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
What a passionate statement of love. I do hope you gave this to her. Welcome to passions  |
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Ted Reynolds Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 331 |
May it continue true for both of you, every word. Welcome to Passions, and thanks for sharing. |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
Welcome, and may your wish become true for you. A nice piece for your entry. Thank you The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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Anne Member
since 1999-12-31
Posts 78 |
Beautifully expressed! |
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Jamie Dawn New Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 1 |
Darling angel...You know that while I read this that my eyes are shining with tears of joy and laughter. Sweetheart, I long for the power that you have with words. I long to whisper to your heart as you whisper to mine. Not only in your words but in everything that you do and say each day. Forever and a day my darling. I love you Richard Anthony...I do. |
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Skyfyre Senior Member
since 1999-08-15
Posts 1906Sitting in Michael's Lap |
**Deep, echoing sigh** Ah, to be loved thusly, and by a poet besides! What an entrance -- and what a lovely couple, to have spawned a piece such as this! Welcome, both of you! --Kess Full fathom five thy father lies, Of his bones are coral made, Those are pearls that were his eyes; Nothing of him that doth fade But doth suffer a sea-change Into something rich and strange... --William Shakespeare, from The Tempest |
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Ted Reynolds Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 331 |
Hey, Rychard, Jamie, we're all in love with you as a pair. If things get ever get tight (and they will, you're human) there's a whole gang of people here to remind you of this debut, and help you keep on this loving track forever. Blessings be to you both. |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
Indeed, what an absolutely exquisite love poem! And yes, it is marvelous to be a poet married to a poet! I am too, and my heart joins yours in your joy! Welcome to Passions! |
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kaleidoscope Junior Member
since 2000-01-10
Posts 38 |
Beautiful poem! Nice to see such love. |
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