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AngelSamsMom Junior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 10Seattle, WA, USA |
Two Hearts Bleed as one Pretty blue eyes With such a beautiful face Wouldn’t you say Love is such a disgrace The day you left me I knew Tears born of regection So sorry we’re threw The pain was traped from the tear’s I cry Theres no more love for me I’d try if only you’d come Back to me So I walk into a ball room Sit upon a chair Love song’s on the radio Takes me back to when you where there I look over my shoulder The tears they start to fall And even though you walked out the door I can still here your loving call But just before she left These soft words were said Like a blade against my heart Supposen we tried Right now I’m falling And its just like I died And as I close my window’s to the world Painted pictures in my mind I’m so sorry to hurt you But I can’t come back this time I now know the day’s As I sit up at night Smoke my last cigerette My tear’s filled with fright Because now I am nothing Except what I have become But even now, I know Two hearts bleed as one ©Copyrighted January 23, 2000 By Michael W Stimatze My heart will go on, my tears I will cry, My laughter will fade, but for all this I do for the love of Sammy |
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Anne Member
since 1999-12-31
Posts 78 |
Oh, such a sad poem! There are a few phrases that really stick with me--"Now I am nothing/except what I've become"--I love that! Great job!  |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very sad and beautiful. I enjoyed this! Denise |
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