Open Poetry #5 |
November Natchez, 1863 |
H. Arlequin Member
since 1999-08-23
Posts 210 |
Yesssssssssssssssss!!!!! This one got accepted by The American Poets and Poetry Journal.... and another, as well, posted here last year in November, "Teachers".... HA is a happy camper..... ))) . . . . November Natchez, 1863 . . . Spongy homespun suits, sopping, stoneweight, turgid, seamless serges, saturate, streaming sodden shelters, scarred swollen shapes scared to swamp the Mississippi steamships, stranded soldiers, stockstill side-by-side, soul-soaked, skin-drenched, scan a listless tide. Septicemic unwashed places, social graces scarce supply, unstirred flesh, miasmal seepage stunning senses, cedes the scene as certain suicide, erasing sights, scents, obscene. Constant sheeting, slanting sleet, slapping faces astern the upperclass salon's plush places snug, serene, secure, ship's officers and crew musing men in misery, with Pilate wash up, too. --H. Arlequin . . . . Poems From the Goober Tree http://nathoo.wustl.edu/goober_tree.htm |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
YEAH for you HA. Great poem, congrats on getting accepted!! Just be glad I'm not your child! *evil grin* |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Congratulations, H.A., that's wonderful, I am so happy for you!!! Denise |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Well done and very deserving. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I wanted to bring this back up for the people who missed it!! Congratulations, again, H.A.!! Denise |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
H. Arlequin, Interesting structure, enjoyed the read. |
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