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H. Arlequin
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since 1999-08-23
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0 posted 2000-01-24 03:59 PM


Yesssssssssssssssss!!!!!

This one got accepted by The American Poets and Poetry Journal....

and another, as well, posted here last year in November, "Teachers"....

HA

is a happy camper..... )))
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November Natchez, 1863
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Spongy homespun suits, sopping, stoneweight,
turgid, seamless serges, saturate,
streaming sodden shelters, scarred swollen shapes
scared to swamp the Mississippi steamships,
stranded soldiers, stockstill side-by-side,
soul-soaked, skin-drenched, scan a listless tide.
Septicemic unwashed places, social
graces scarce supply, unstirred flesh, miasmal
seepage stunning senses, cedes the scene
as certain suicide, erasing sights, scents, obscene.
Constant sheeting, slanting sleet, slapping faces
astern the upperclass salon's plush places
snug, serene, secure, ship's officers and crew
musing men in misery, with Pilate wash up, too.


               --H. Arlequin
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Poems From the Goober Tree http://nathoo.wustl.edu/goober_tree.htm



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Echo Rhayne
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since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495
Canyon Country, CA
1 posted 2000-01-24 04:41 PM


YEAH for you HA.  Great poem, congrats on getting accepted!!

 Just be glad I'm not your child! *evil grin*


Denise
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2 posted 2000-01-24 05:11 PM


Congratulations, H.A., that's wonderful, I am so happy for you!!!  

Denise

Mike
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3 posted 2000-01-24 06:55 PM


Well done and very deserving.
Denise
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4 posted 2000-01-25 07:02 PM


I wanted to bring this back up for the people who missed it!! Congratulations, again, H.A.!!

Denise

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
5 posted 2000-01-25 07:10 PM


H. Arlequin,
Interesting structure, enjoyed the read.

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