In My Life (short but sweet)

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Open Poetry #5

In My Life (short but sweet)

Holden
Junior Member

since 1999-12-23

Posts 26
Brighton East, Victoria, Australia

0 posted 2000-01-25 08:30 AM

If the world stopped turning
& your love stopped yearning,
I would still die a happy man.
If in the end things fall apart
I hope you know in your heart,
& hopefully you'll understand.
My one dream had come true,
In my life I was loved by you.

Too often we are blind to love
& can't see what were thinking of,
So I ask please look at me.
I know life's not always fair
& not everyone tries to care,
But my love is here for you to see.
My favourite dream is of you,
Showing you my love is true.

'I once picked a daisy's petals searching for an answer. I went through 10 daisy's before getting the answer I was looking for...I love you.'

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

1 posted 2000-01-25 10:31 AM

"My one dream had come true, In my life I was loved by you." (wistful sigh) *S* Beautiful poem, Holden!

spiked
Senior Member

since 2000-01-13

Posts 873
Hammond, La USA

2 posted 2000-01-25 10:58 AM

well done Holden
Very expressive
someone is very lucky

tulip
Member

since 1999-07-04

Posts 320
unknown

3 posted 2000-01-25 12:14 PM

It sounds as if you are both very lucky!!!

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

4 posted 2000-01-25 01:17 PM

A beautiful love poem, very sweet!

Denise

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