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Little Hand Prints |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
Little hand prints on the window Memories captured in time Even if I wanted to wipe them away, How could I? The imprint is implanted now A moment forever frozen In the chambers of my heart A treasured token If only I could relive Each and every day That has passed swifter than the last Until fading faintly away That is impossible wishing And impervious to logic Surpassing all known laws of nature Beyond even Merlin’s magic So instead I will accept change As she will most surely grow And cherish as long as I can Little hand prints on the window |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I would have cherished them more had I known how quickly they would be gone.... Beautiful, touching poem! Denise |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
I've got a 2 year old daughter. I'm trying to hold onto all the memories. |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
How precious this is!! back to the top! Just be glad I'm not your child! *evil grin* |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I enjoyed this one very much! *S* |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
Hey JML glad to see you joined.  . You are going to like it here. Enjoyed your poem. My kids are young adults now, but the memories of them being young are still fresh in my mind. Look forward to reading more.You got to get up every morning with a smile on your face and show the world all the love in your heart Then people are gonna treat you better You're gonna find, yes you will That your beautiful as you feel. Carol King |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
This is precious and so well expressed. I read it aloud and my twelve year old sighed, "Cool." I would have to agree!  |
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tulip Member
since 1999-07-04
Posts 320unknown |
The years fly by so quickly, I really need to slow down a bit and enjoy it while I have it. Thanks for reminding me!!! |
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One Who Understands Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 251Cedar Rapids, Iowa |
I remember when I left little hand prints on the window. Reading this poem made me realize how special those moments really are |
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Bad Boy Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 78 |
This is very sweet,I too remember the print`s from my children. And they really do grow up way to fast. There`s nothing in the world as precious as a child   The Devil Made Me Do It. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JML- And this one left handprints all over the windows of my heart. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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