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Crow Love |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Honeydew I love you, Yes I really do! You change the color of my day, When I'm feeling blue. Punkin Puss yore everthang, This old heart desires, You're smoother than my pickup truck, Ridin' on new tires. I love ya like a crow does, His road kill with all it's flaws, I love you as a crow would, I guess it's just "becaws" |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
See how mushy these bad boys get after being at passions for a while? Ahhh, Toe, this is so romantic! Liz |
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Bad Boy Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 78 |
I have never known anyone to be inspired to write a poem, from road kill  Even so I have to admit this is better than the last two. I think it`s time for that beer now  Thank`s for sharing this one Toe.  The Devil Made Me Do It. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
ROFL @ becaws... *G* And what more could anyone want than to be right up there with road kill... appreciated... flaws and all? LOL. Now THAT's romance! *G* |
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Bad Boy Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 78 |
Im sorry, I just had to read this again. Where in the heck did you get the idea for this one? If you dont mind me asking. This one has brought tear`s to my eye`s. lmao..If this is what passion does to a man,maybe I should get out while Im able. lmao All in fun Toe The Devil Made Me Do It. |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Now, that's love!  |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
well this is the missing o&o reporting in, great stuff Mr. Toe....thank you for the smiles ROFG....loved all the poems you posted today, and yep, I needed the smiles [This message has been edited by Iloveit (edited 01-25-2000).] |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Toe, I knew that under there (where?) somewhere there was a true romatic. Seriously, this was too cute |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
thanks guys and gals....I hope this at least brought a smile to one or two.....I know things are kinda tough on alotta the folks right now....and my prayers are with ya....if I can bring one smile to one....I know I did something productive today.....Thanks again... |
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Ted Reynolds Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 331 |
Toerag, in the most positive and admiring and pleased sense, I find this one just AWFUL . . . like I hope it's supposed to be. Doing one like this takes skill . . . and guts! |
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SEA 
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Toe, I have fun reading your work, I also read between the lines. You have a huge heart. Even if you don't want us to see it, I can.(That is more attractive than any snide remark.......you should try it BB) - SEA |
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Bad Boy Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 78 |
Sea:Snide Remark?? It`s all in fun and im Sure Toe know`s that. If i`ve offended you in any way Sea, Im sorry. The Devil Made Me Do It. |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Badboy....I love snide remarks! (And the kind ones too)....but if it weren't for snide remarks, I'd never have learned to love Balladeer and LongJohn?.....LOL |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Toe, Come on up to Toronto old boy, We'll have a drink of good Canadian Beer, (if you can handle it) and we got this here resturant that serves a dish called Texas Road Kill, I danno maybe they import it eh!. I live in Winter Wonderland and danno why I'm here, but everytime I read some wit of Toe I need another beer. eh! eh! That's my beer eh! Take off eh!. |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Well, You brought a smile here and I needed it.. HUSG Don't ask me where I'm going, just listen when I'm gone and far away you'll hear me singing softly to the dawn. |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Toe - was this first person road kill or first person maker of road kill? Just asking - once again you have wowed the ladies with a novel approach. |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Bad Boy, I just meant open your heart sweetie! You do not offend me. It would take more than a snide remark to offend me- my Daddy was a sailor- I am my father's daughter!! -  -SEA |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Toe, I put a post up here for Bad Boy, I don't see it. Sheesh, I give up. -SEA |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Toe this is the thrid message I'm trying to put on here, am I doing something wrong? It shows up on the other screen that I posted but not on here. AHHHHHHHH! -SEA |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Ok there they are, I feel stupid now.-SEA |
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Bad Boy Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 78 |
SEA, they are showing up  And if I open my heart in here,im afraid I might never be the same. But I`ll try  thank`s Sea Bad Boy The Devil Made Me Do It. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
ROFLMAO!!! Toe you are so original, just like KFC!! Love that last line! <*\\\>< Where there is faith, there is love. Where there is love, there is peace. Where there is peace, there is GOD. Where there is GOD, there is no need. Hallmark |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I can think of no one more qualified to write about road-kill than you, Toe. I noticed that most of the steaks you eat have Goodyear treadmarks across 'em!  |
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