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cordell pennix New Member
since 2000-01-15
Posts 4 |
I Love You My knees start to weaken At the first sight of your face My heart starts to melt At the thought of your embrace Your love flows through me Like a river flows down its path Your kiss lifts me up so high I could probably fall to my death I really wish that When i look into your eyes I could see Exactly how it is that You feel about me I get nervous when you're around me I feel I could cry when you're away I dream about you Every night and day I want you to know My last three words will always remain true Regardless of what I may say or do You'll always know that I Love You To my girl: Lindsey to let her know that i will always and forever love her know matter what happens Your boyfriend Cordell |
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Anne Member
since 1999-12-31
Posts 78 |
Lindsey, you're a lucky girl!  Great poem! I look forward to seeing more of your work! |
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Dolphins3 Member
since 1999-09-30
Posts 135Wisconsin |
Cordell, Welcome to Passions. Great first poem posted . She's very lucky to have a guy like you. I look forward to reading more of your work. |
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Gene Senior Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 935Colorado, USA |
Welcome, Cordell. I'm a newbie here too. Great poem! Beautifully written--I like the flow. ---- Gene |
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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678 |
This drips with sweetness I don't buy temporary insanity as they murder defense. Because people kill people. That's and animal instinct. I think breaking into someone's home and ironing all their clothes is temporary insanity. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Welcome to Passions, Cordell! This is such a beautiful heartfelt expression of your love! Please check your email for a special welcome! Denise |
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simplyYRREHS Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 162 |
Endlessly sweet, Cordell. Welcome to Passions! |
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Paul Hoekman Member
since 1999-12-28
Posts 382Harwinton Ct. U>S>A> |
Keep letting those thoughts flow from your heart like this and you will surely keep hers and win all ours! VERY NICELY WRITTEN Welcome!  |
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One Who Understands Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 251Cedar Rapids, Iowa |
Wonderful poem, and a wonderful tribute to your girlfriend With that talent, you will be very welcome here at passions |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
This is sooo sweet!!!! She's a lucky girl!!! Welcome to passions!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Cordell a very romantic poem I really enjoyed reading it... Tracie |
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Little_Spyro Senior Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 659San Diego, CA, USA |
Romance... Now there's a subject I have a hard time working with...even though [I grudgingly admit after writing a lot of poems and getting responses like "excellent" and "you're a great poet""] I'm a good poet... But you seem to have hit the spot! Great work, cordell! Little Spyro T. Dragon |
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Buffpimp Junior Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 39 |
VERY NICE POEM! Even though I did read this before . I loved it TONS and thats why I remember I read it somewhere else . Keep up the good work |
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Alina Le Ann Junior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 40INDIANA |
This is a great poem!!! I have those exact feelings for the love of my life and I'm so glad that somebody could find a way to put those feelings into words as beautifully as you did!!! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
She should love this. Welcome to passions |
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The Haunted Poet Junior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 37Sumner Washington |
Simply put...... You're the man!!!! Good poem!!! And watch out for the fall after the kiss..... sometimes it may be too high! Just kidding! |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
Well... don't think I could top your vision of love~ How very romantic~ Marie~ |
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