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simplyYRREHS
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since 2000-01-03
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0 posted 2000-01-24 09:15 PM


*I am resting my quill today.  After a very stressful afternoon, my seven year old retreated to his bedroom after school.  A few minutes later, he returned with a creative drawing, on that horrid manilla school paper, and a poem attatched.  He wanted to cheer "mom" by sharing a poem, as he knows how much I enjoy escaping into this poetry haven.  I was very touched by his effort and consideration as to what seems to make me smile these days.  Just sharing.  Great start for my chip off the ole block. I did not correct his 2nd grade spelling, by the way.  Enjoy. ~Sherry


"God Bless Amarica"
     by Drake

Amaracans fout and that is how we were made.
They are stong and brave.
This day we stile have solders that fite in wars so we can be free.
We shold thank them
and that is the way it shold be.

© Copyright 2000 Sherry - All Rights Reserved
Bad Boy
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since 2000-01-23
Posts 78

1 posted 2000-01-24 10:55 PM


GOOD JOB DRAKE
Mabey you can give me some pointer`s?
If you keep writing maybe Mom will let you get your own name for passion?


Bye Bye Little Buddy




[This message has been edited by Bad Boy (edited 01-25-2000).]

Denise
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since 1999-08-22
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2 posted 2000-01-24 10:59 PM


This is a wonderful poem, Drake! Well done!
That was so sweet of you to cheer Mommy up like that with your poem. We like that!  

Sherry- Please check your email for a surprise for Drake!

Denise

[This message has been edited by dsnyder (edited 01-24-2000).]

Gene
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since 2000-01-23
Posts 935
Colorado, USA
3 posted 2000-01-24 11:12 PM


I've been touched by an angel.  

----
Gene

One Who Understands
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since 2000-01-20
Posts 251
Cedar Rapids, Iowa
4 posted 2000-01-25 01:04 AM


Yes it is buddy!

You write wonderful poems

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