Open Poetry #5 |
How easy is it to forget? |
d.schultz Junior Member
since 2000-01-21
Posts 43 |
How easy is it to forget? The Smell~Only a rememberence in the air~A hint of you flows by How easy is it to forget? The Smile~That often was not missed~That flowed so easy across my face How easy is it to forget? The Laughter~That often came after hello~The flow of your voice is all it took How easy is it to forget? My Heart~Racing at only a thought of you~My body exploded like fire works How easy is it to forget? The Touch~That flowed through my body~That flowed with great passion and Hunger never felt before How easy is it to forget? A Kiss~That said it all~even if unintentional How easy is it to forget? The Last Day~ The Last Time~ The Last Memory~ Am I so easy to forget? |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
d.Shultz- Welcome to Passion's. Well, with this entrance, I'd venture to say that you'd not be easy to forget. This is really very pretty. Hope that we get to see more. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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SnglDad Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 115Seattle area |
Welcome to passions and I have to agree, that is a great enterance. Thanx for sharing and keep posting God Bless Joel |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
welcome to Passions. I have to echo the words of the others. I hope to see more of your wonderful works. |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Very good...welcome to the family! Check your email for a special welcome! |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
Welcome to passions with passions as I see Well done certainly I cannot more agree The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Great way to start! Hope to see more. <*\\\>< Where there is faith, there is love. Where there is love, there is peace. Where there is peace, there is GOD. Where there is GOD, there is no need. Hallmark |
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simplyYRREHS Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 162 |
S A L U T A T I O N S! Wonderful poem, and wonderful debut! Sherry |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Simply beautiful! -SEA |
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One Who Understands Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 251Cedar Rapids, Iowa |
Wonderful I'd like to see more of your pieces! |
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G. A. Webb Member
since 2000-01-21
Posts 441Stanton, California, USA |
Wow...There is a person in my mind that I thought of when I read this and I must say, that I couldn't have said it any better myself. I think I'll send it to her, or at least keep it for me. Very well done. |
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d.schultz Junior Member
since 2000-01-21
Posts 43 |
To All of you.. Thank you for your kind words. Very much appreciated |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Welcome to passions |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Welcome to Passions! This is so beautiful! I look forward to more from you! Denise |
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Paul Hoekman Member
since 1999-12-28
Posts 382Harwinton Ct. U>S>A> |
WELCOME TO THE FAMILY this is a beautiful entrance post, and look forward to growing with you. Read ya later! |
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d.schultz Junior Member
since 2000-01-21
Posts 43 |
Thanks to all of you who responded and thank you for all your kind words........ Happy to hear you enjoyed...... Look forward to reading more all of your great poems thanks again |
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