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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia 
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Title Guitar Man Hey my guitar man strum some chords for me let your finger move on those strings as I imagine them moving across my soul. Hey my guitar man the tone you play Is it real? or just my fantasy of you, sitting in a field of wildflowers gazing in my eyes. You move me with your music so loud and strong but yet with every motion of your hand you move my emotion to a higher ground Hey my guitar man set me apart from all the others hearing you for I am the listener of your heart You got to get up every morning with a smile on your face and show the world all the love in your heart Then people are gonna treat you better You're gonna find, yes you will That your beautiful as you feel. Carol King |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is lovely, Kitkat! Beautiful music! Denise |
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Anne Member
since 1999-12-31
Posts 78 |
I like it! Nicely done!  |
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CrazyChick Member
since 2000-01-05
Posts 132 |
Great Work!!!!! |
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Paul Hoekman Member
since 1999-12-28
Posts 382Harwinton Ct. U>S>A> |
Nothing prettier than the sound of heart strings being played. Well done! You just played a chord on mine. |
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Poetic Sadness Junior Member
since 2000-01-15
Posts 12Kelowna, BC, Canada |
Great poem, kitkat, I enjoyed it a lot. I really liked the last verse, reminds me of many guys that I've fallen for. Ah, all the guitar men that draw us in...Congrats. Heather The things you fear are undefeatable not by their nature, but by your approach. -Jewel |
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One Who Understands Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 251Cedar Rapids, Iowa |
Wonderful poem |
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