Open Poetry #5 |
Lost without you |
vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
I always see your smile, But this time, I didn't see you, While I was asleep, You walked away, I'll never find you, Singing my song, I'll never see your smile, But I don't know, What I'll do without you, Whever I see your picture, I miss those days , We used to have fun, Now you had to run away, You packed your bags leaving me Without a note, Didn't want me to find you gone, I always wanted to kiss you, First thing in the morning, Butt I find you gone away from me, I'm low, When I switch off the light, I'm lost When I don't see you smile, I'm lost, When I'm without your love, I'm lost without you |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
I'm sorry to see that you're so sad Cheer up sweetie!! |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
=o( yeah cheer up *hugs* ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~ |
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Betty Gravitt Member
since 1999-09-11
Posts 222Georgia United States |
I'm so sorry to see you sad. Tomorrow is another day. I enjoyed the read. B Gravitt |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Sad yet beautiful. Well done, vandana! I enjoyed this very much! Denise |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Your words sent a message worthy to understand. Nice work! DH |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Another nice one Vandana.... |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Good poem Vandana, but sad. |
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Tamera Member
since 1999-12-28
Posts 121 |
Cheer up! Hugs to you, beautiful poem, very sad....Tamera |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
vandana, Another lovely poem. I am really enjoying your poetry Liz |
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Sonny Junior Member
since 1999-12-18
Posts 29Schenectady, NY, USA |
Vandana- Love once you had - now gone, never to return it seems. Have faith, for love is never gone. It only fades to gain strength so you can love again...forever. Sonny |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
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