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whiskey
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0 posted 2000-01-24 08:04 AM


" Seeing Eyes "

Visions dancing
Across my mind
Seeing you
Holding me

Pictures Seen
Inside my head
Seeing you
Kissing me

Sight I can feel
With in my brain
Seeing you
Wanting me

Memory Flooding
Into my thought
Seeing you
Loving me

© Copyright 2000 Julie Nelson - All Rights Reserved
hoot_owl_rn
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1 posted 2000-01-24 10:59 AM


Whiskey...I think this is one of your best. Nicely done  
Denise
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2 posted 2000-01-24 12:12 PM


Oh, Whiskey, this is so beautiful, I agree! One of your best!

Denise

Janet Marie
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3 posted 2000-01-24 12:46 PM


these are my favorite kinds of poems...filled with memories of love.
this is beautiful. Janet Marie

HelmutB
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4 posted 2000-01-24 01:19 PM


So very cute this poem there is
to love and be loved is such a bliss
Well done, now don't get frisky
Rather step up to the bar there Wiskey

 The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.


whiskey
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5 posted 2000-01-24 07:18 PM


Thank you everyone your replies mean alot  

Helmut,  Line em up mate , lol

vandana
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6 posted 2000-01-25 06:27 PM


Hi,Whisky,I really like your stlye of writing.Check your e-mail.
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