Open Poetry #5 |
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Seeing Eyes |
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whiskey![]()
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia ![]() |
" Seeing Eyes " Visions dancing Across my mind Seeing you Holding me Pictures Seen Inside my head Seeing you Kissing me Sight I can feel With in my brain Seeing you Wanting me Memory Flooding Into my thought Seeing you Loving me |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Whiskey...I think this is one of your best. Nicely done ![]() |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Oh, Whiskey, this is so beautiful, I agree! One of your best! Denise |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
these are my favorite kinds of poems...filled with memories of love. this is beautiful. Janet Marie |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
So very cute this poem there is to love and be loved is such a bliss Well done, now don't get frisky Rather step up to the bar there Wiskey The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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whiskey![]()
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Thank you everyone your replies mean alot ![]() Helmut, Line em up mate , lol |
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vandana![]()
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Hi,Whisky,I really like your stlye of writing.Check your e-mail. ![]() |
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