Open Poetry #5 |
Before You Go To Sleep |
Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Before You Go To Sleep Before you say good-bye, my love Dance one more dance with me And sing me one more loving song Of fishers of the sea Before you walk away from me Please tell me one more tale Of rolling waves and woven nets And morning's golden sail Before you go to sleep, my love Walk with me once more Along the fine and whitened sands Of Ipanema's shore Before you sail the final voyage Let's listen to the psalm The wondrous song of Sabia From top the coconut palm Before you leave me all alone Please sprinkle stardust in my face Just sing me one more melody Of fisher's secret place Before you go to meet our God Say one more prayer with me Before you fish the golden fish In heaven's sparkling sea So follow now the morning star Its twinkling path to light the way And ride the smooth and starlit crests And fish the fishers' way Elizabeth Santos [This message has been edited by Elizabeth Santos (edited 01-23-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Elizabeth- God, how this poem speaks your very heart. Tony ... is soooooo handsome. And the tears are in my eyes. I pray again. I love you both. Love ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Thank you so much Marge, you have been so supportive. I should footnote this poem by saying that we have been given little if any hope, however, we have months ahead to fight it, and are seeking the best medical care available. We have not given up hope. But this poem just came out this way, this is what is in my heart Liz |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
And here I sit with the tears... Lizzy..this is absolutely stunning and I am SO glad you have writing to express it all. More love to you two and John and the rest of the family...hugs, my too far away sister of verse. [This message has been edited by Severn (edited 01-23-2000).] |
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simplyYRREHS Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 162 |
~and a prayer from a distant stranger. beautiful display of your heart, Liz. Peace be with you always in the days to come. Sherry "Heaven is under our feet as well as over our heads." ~Henry David Thoreau |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
A beautiful expression of your devotion and love which is truly inspiring. You two are in my prayers. God bless you, both. HUGS Denise |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
A man to whom tears does not come easily can barely see to type this reply. God bless you both, Elizabeth. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
I am speechless and tearful in the beauty of you and this devoted and loving poem. Love to you, Martie. |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
We must truly be a family for my heart hurts so right now. I cry as I type this..for you are a woman both blessed and a blessing. My prayers are with you and Tony. I believe in miracles............... |
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tulip Member
since 1999-07-04
Posts 320unknown |
Elizabeth, This is very beautiful. I wish you the best in all that you are going through!!! |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
I'll join in those tears Liz! This is deeply sorrowful! My dear there is always hope in God! And rest assured you both will be in my prayers. If you don't mind I have a list and would like to send out a prayer request for Anthony to have many more pray for him? If that's alright with you I'll get right on it as soon as you answer! God bless you Liz and Anthony. May God guide those doctors! <*\\\>< Where there is faith, there is love. Where there is love, there is peace. Where there is peace, there is GOD. Where there is GOD, there is no need. Hallmark |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Elizabeth... I truly believe that you and Tony are blessed to have each other. May God Bless you both... My prayers are with you... |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Elizabeth, Beautiful as always my friend, but especially now even more beautiful. You are both in my prayers and thoughts. God Bless you both! *HUGS* What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
I should explain that Tony was born and raised on the small island city of Sao Luis, on the northern coast of Brazil and all his life has planned on retiring to a similar place, where he could live near the beach and fish in the ocean every day. That is the reason for this theme Marge, Thanks again for your beautiful response and also for your wonderful phone call.(and instructive e-mails) Kamla, Thank you dear. It was wonderful to hear your voice. (I don't want to see that phone bill.) Thanks for all your support Sherry, Not too distant to be felt in my heart Thank you Denise, Always there for me, you give me strength Balladeer. I have a shoulder for you to cry on. I am touched that you were moved by this.Thank you and thanks for your help in getting this picture posted Martie, It's so wonderful to have you read and feel my emotions. Thank you PDV. I don't know what I would do right now without my poet family.You all have given so much love and support Tulip, Thank you so much Whtdove, Thank you so very much and the answer of course is yes Love you all Liz |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elizabeth, My prayers are with you both, God bless. Love Sy |
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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678 |
How could this be posted so long without me seeing? Liz as I read this my heart fell and my tears began and I can see the love you have for him. I ask that the Lord find you and that his love embrace you and Tony. to provide comfort in this time... What a true blessing and gift you have given and may your blessing forever flow. GOD BLESS I don't buy temporary insanity as they murder defense. Because people kill people. That's and animal instinct. I think breaking into someone's home and ironing all their clothes is temporary insanity. |
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Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA |
May God bless you and Tony. |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
I don't know the exact situation you are going through, but through it I wish you the best out of whatever happens. This poem has made me evaluate some things in my life. Thank you for this wonderful work. I wish you peace and happiness. |
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Skyfyre Senior Member
since 1999-08-15
Posts 1906Sitting in Michael's Lap |
Oh -- praying, praying HARD ... Elizabeth, sweet angel-poetess, miracles DO happen. Believe. --Kess Full fathom five thy father lies, Of his bones are coral made, Those are pearls that were his eyes; Nothing of him that doth fade But doth suffer a sea-change Into something rich and strange... --William Shakespeare, from The Tempest |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Elizabeth, your poem for your husband is precious and everlasting...as is your love for him. So much of what you impart with these words, I have experienced, so recently. I cannot tell you the depth to which this moves me. Love him within each precious moment, dear Elizabeth, and let him love you just as furiously and peacefully as he can. Love and shared peace, Claire [This message has been edited by Meadowmuse (edited 01-24-2000).] |
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One Who Understands Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 251Cedar Rapids, Iowa |
Thats truly beautiful...I really cant say enough. But I will say that you are in my prayers. This lovely tribute is warmer than the tear on my cheek. God Bless |
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PhaerieChild Senior Member
since 1999-08-30
Posts 1787Aloha, Oregon |
Trying to type while tears are streaming down one's face is difficult but when I think of the difficulty you are going through right now it is a small price to pay to tell you that you and Tony will be in our thoughts and prayers in our home for as long as you need and/or want them. This is a lovely post that truly expresses the depth of your love and devotion to your husband. You are truly blessed and are truly a blessing as well. Love and lots of (((hugs))) to both of you. Poetry~ Words falling on paper, painting a dream. Shawna R. Holder Boise, Idaho |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Nan, Thank you so much for helping me with this post and for your kind words Liz Dark Angel, Thank you dear - so sweet Liz Sy, Thank you for all of your loving support Liz First night, From someone whose heart has been troubled, your words fall very gently on my ears. Thank you Liz Tara, Thank you so much Liz |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Temptress,Thank you so much for your very kind words. I feel surrounded with love Kess, thank you dear, with a hug Claire, Your words warm my heart, so sorry if you've had the same sorrow Steve, Thank you for your support Wild child. What a lovely response, Thank you Liz |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Lizzy...You're husband looks like a movie star! You know you are both in everyone's prayers...(even mine for what it's probably worth), I know exactly what you're going through...but yanno?...It's strange, but from reading most all of your stuff over these past few months...I think you're probably a strong gal....and strength is a very valuable asset right now....not only for yourself and family, but your husband too....Chin up....determined attitude.....and an optimistic look at everyday will help all of you a bunch.....Keep the faith gal....Ya gotta lotta friends here thinking of you! |
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Deb Lynne Member
since 1999-08-19
Posts 180Where blue skies meet blue ocean |
Believe in all things. Discover God's love. Let miracles happen. Kisses to you both. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Elizabeth: What a beautiful expression of love... I hope you know how much we care... Every word brings a tear... And every tear carries a prayer. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Toe, You are absolutely right, I am strong in some ways, and am doing well, and so are my children, except one, and that is my cocern right now. Your words do mean so much to me and to the entire family. Thanks Liz Deb, I know that miracles do happen, I'm afraid we will need one with this Thank you Liz Suthern, I am so warmed by all the support and prayers. Thank you, dear Liz |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Oh Liz...this made me cry. I'm praying as hard as I can here. |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
My thoughts and prayers are with you. You've touched me deeply. Great poem. Richard |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Hoot, thank you, dear. We were able to get and appointment on Friday with one of the very best thoracic surgeons in the country, at the Univ of Pa. Hospital in Phila and so I'm hoping on Friday to have a clearer picture of what the chances are. Thanks for your love Liz Richard, your support is much appreciated. We have many praying with us Thank you Liz |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Elizabeth and Tony ~ May angels hover in strange form over, taking weight of life off of your shoulders; may angels' wings dry your tears and God and Heaven you never fear. May you know deep strong contentment in the remaining days you have to spend for every day shall a blessing be when in your love's eyes, love you see. Sunshine Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
My prayers and love are for you, Tony and the family Liz..... Shannon |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Liz that prayer request was sent out last night! God help me Liz, I hope I'm not wrong, but please go check this web site, this could be your miracle. And get these seeds. I will go into detail if you wish in an email, but they do help, I promise. There are many documented cases if you look, time is of the essence here. Please go look... http://www.apricotsfromgod.com/journal.htm [This message has been edited by WhtDove (edited 01-24-2000).] |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Sunshine What a lovely poem you offer in comfort to me and Tony. Thank you so much Pepper, my angel, always there for me. Thanks for all your support. You are wonderful Whtdove, I will check this out. Any miracle will do Thank you all, Liz [This message has been edited by Elizabeth Santos (edited 01-24-2000).] |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Liz, This is a very beautiful poem. I don't know what the situation is but I follow a certain health lifestyle. This lifestyle has helped many people on the brink. It sounds to simple to help, but whatever steps you are taking it can only help more. please visit this site http://www.hacres.com/. Read the section you don't have to be sick. I hope everything works out. Parker |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Elizabeth I send out a heartfelt blessing to you and Tony. I pray that our heavenly Father will take all of your family into his arms and Love you and care for you. May each member of your family feel his Love, his grace, his healing hands, and mercy and compassion. Take care, James |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
My prayers are with you and Tony. A candle is burning for you two here in my heart The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Sweetheart: Your poem speaks of love that is defined by memories of both past and future - memories live on Elizabeth, they will live on in your children and each time your heart beats so the love will beat in unison as the sound reverberates with the crashing of the waves ... Huge hugs sweetheart Don't ask me where I'm going, just listen when I'm gone and far away you'll hear me singing softly to the dawn. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Thank you all for your concerns and your beautiful responses. We have had some encouragement from a doctor at the Cedar Sinai Hospital in Los Angeles, and Tony will be seeing another doctor at the Univ of Pa Hospital in Phila.this Friday, so he will be in the best of hands. Things might work out after all. Perhaps those prayers are working. I hope so Liz |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Liz that is wonderful news! I knew miracles happen! I just knew it! Prayers are working, don't ever doubt that! Thank You Lord for hope! We'll keep right on praying! WooHoo!! |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Liz, this is so beautiful. I, too, would like to add my prayers and thoughts to you and your family. And, yes, miracles do happen. We are all praying for one. |
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