Open Poetry #5 |
The Butterfly's Dance |
SEA
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As I was sitting something caught my eye as it softly went fluttering by Looking to see what had caught my eye I saw a beautiful Butterfly Gently dancing through the air suddenly I became quite aware The Butterfly's Dance was an expression of love given to us by the Lord above. -SEA- |
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simplyYRREHS Member
since 2000-01-03
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Bingo! Great thought written in perfect meter. Sherry "Heaven is under our feet as well as over our heads." ~Henry David Thoreau |
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Denise
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Gentle and lovely poem! Beautiful! Denise |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA- Nothing strikes my fancy as much as butterflies. You've sent one fluttering across my mind. Thank you ... this is just lovely. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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SEA
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since 2000-01-18
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Ladies, I'm glad you liked this. My Mom used to call me her little catapillar. Now that I am older, I am her Butterfly. Kinda like calling me her ugly duckling HA HA -SEA |
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Martie
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This is a sweet and thoughtful poem. I enjoyed it's flutter. |
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