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On my way to you
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On my way to you |
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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678
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I wrote this while sitting outside my work in a dark parking lot. < !signature-->On my way to you ~First Knight~ As I sit alone, in a space meant for a car, The darkness outside fills my eyes. And as my eyes close.... My heart calls out so loud and strong, "Take me to her, I am not complete." "Let her feel me, and to live by her touch." Pretending the breeze is you, Softy running over all of me. My tears fall in the darkness. Your to good to be true, and yet you call my name so clear. I want to be in your arms and my responsibilities, They trap me here. How can I put aside these things of you, as if these daily things are more. What is more important than you? "Nothing..... Nothing I say" As I place each foot down, with the placement of an artist. And make my way to you, Know that you are the most important thing in my life. I don't buy temporary insanity as they murder defense. Because people kill people. That's and animal instinct. I think breaking into someone's home and ironing all their clothes is temporary insanity. [This message has been edited by First__Knight (edited 01-23-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
David- I can feel the wanting and the longing to join with one you love. It will come. Smile ...  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
FK, WOW I too can feel the wanting and the longing here, I can relate. Just don't let go!! Beautiful poem FK!! What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
A beautiful poem. I enjoyed this a lot. |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
David...Life is a balance and it is choices. Time will tell which direction your feet move. My hope for you is that you make the decision before circumstances make it for you. My luck and love to you my friend. |
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PhaerieChild Senior Member
since 1999-08-30
Posts 1787Aloha, Oregon |
Very beautifully expressed my friend. I hope you find your way to her arms soon. Poetry~ Words falling on paper, painting a dream. Shawna R. Holder Boise, Idaho |
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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678 |
Thank you Marge, Dark Angel , Munda. Yes Marilyn I know where I want to be....and getting there is the hard part. My job, my family ( What I have...which is not much), my finacial well being. They keep me here for now. Securing that and I will soon be there She knows I am coming......How can I not? Thank you so muchThank you too Wildchild I don't buy temporary insanity as they murder defense. Because people kill people. That's and animal instinct. I think breaking into someone's home and ironing all their clothes is temporary insanity. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
First, Enjoyed the read. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Oh Darling...this is lovely. I know there are things that need to be worked out and I am patient...Now get here!!!...lol Seriously, thank you for this and for saying "Know that you are the most important thing in my life" I love you, Ruth At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet. ~Plato |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
One footstep at a time makes you wise and strong--Feelings are so strong in this FK and beautiful. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is romantic and beautiful!! Denise |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
Oh so beautiful and touching...Wanna give my boyfriend a few pointers LoL. Quite an excellent poem, for quite an excellent person! ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ Love is such a lonely art, and death is but a taste. Minds are merely instruments that often go to waste! ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ |
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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678 |
Thank you Sy and Denise Martie....Yes on in front of the other. Echo...I get all my pointers from Ruth. Ruth--Even though this is more of random thoughts spread upon this page....They are ever so real. And I thank you so for your never ending understanding and waiting I don't buy temporary insanity as they murder defense. Because people kill people. That's and animal instinct. I think breaking into someone's home and ironing all their clothes is temporary insanity. |
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