Open Poetry #5 |
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Secret Place |
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Grandma Jo Member
since 2000-01-02
Posts 51 |
I have a secret place, Where friends are always welcome. Where warm wishes and happy times abound. I have a secret place, Where my family is always safe. Where all my loved ones stay close at hand. I have a secret place, Where God surrounds me with peace and love. Where I am not afraid to be myself. I have a secret place, Where I will take a child in trouble. Where a tear is turned into a smile. I have a secret place, Where no one hurts or feels the pain of sickness. Where there is enough love for all I meet. I have a secret place, Where you are always welcome. That secret place is my heart. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
WOW! This speaks volumes! I love it! And what a wonderful heart! Beautiful, I really enjoyed this! <*\\\>< Where there is faith, there is love. Where there is love, there is peace. Where there is peace, there is GOD. Where there is GOD, there is no need. Hallmark |
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Paul Hoekman Member
since 1999-12-28
Posts 382Harwinton Ct. U>S>A> |
Well Grandma Jo from your first post your secret was out! Very Well Done. ![]() |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is beautiful, Jo! I lovely peek into your heart! ![]() Denise |
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whiskey![]()
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
This is wonderful , so sweet what a precious heart you have ![]() |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
Jo...this is lovely. I have been privalaged in my life to have experienced that secret place. I have to apologize to you for the last few weeks. I have withdrawn from many people dear to my life. When the darkness surrounds me, instead of reaching out, I tend to retreat. Next time I do that give me a kick in the pants would ya? ![]() Thankyou for reminding me of the comfort I do have in my life. ((HUG)) |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
This is so sweet Grandma Jo and shows a big and beautiful heart. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
And from what Marilyn tells me, you have a very big heart...room for all those her at passions and more ![]() |
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Anne Member
since 1999-12-31
Posts 78 |
"There is a castle on a cloud.." ...except it's right here! God bless you! ![]() |
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Bad Boy Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 78 |
It`s to bad there isn`t a place open to the public that is as warm and gentle as your heart. Very sweet. ![]() ![]() The Devil Made Me Do It. |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
A beautiful, well-written, heartfelt poem! You're a gifted poet. You brought me tears of joy and sorrow. What a wonderful person you must be! Wish there were more. But God gives those He loves, those secret places. I have one inside me too. |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
And what a beautiful heart you have ! Great poem ![]() Hey, Marilyn, next time darkness surrounds you, I don't mind kicking ya ! ![]() [This message has been edited by Munda (edited 01-23-2000).] |
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