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Grandma Jo
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since 2000-01-02
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0 posted 2000-01-22 10:28 PM


I have a secret place,
Where friends are always welcome.
Where warm wishes and happy times abound.

I have a secret place,
Where my family is always safe.
Where all my loved ones stay close at hand.

I have a secret place,
Where God surrounds me with peace and love.
Where I am not afraid to be myself.

I have a secret place,
Where I will take a child in trouble.
Where a tear is turned into a smile.

I have a secret place,
Where no one hurts or feels the pain of sickness.
Where there is enough love for all I meet.

I have a secret place,
Where you are always welcome.
That secret place is my heart.

© Copyright 2000 Jo-Ann Harrison - All Rights Reserved
WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
1 posted 2000-01-22 10:31 PM


WOW! This speaks volumes! I love it! And what a wonderful heart! Beautiful, I really enjoyed this!

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Where there is faith,
there is love.
Where there is love,
there is peace.
Where there is peace,
there is GOD.
Where there is GOD,
there is no need.

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Paul Hoekman
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since 1999-12-28
Posts 382
Harwinton Ct. U>S>A>
2 posted 2000-01-22 10:36 PM


Well Grandma Jo
from your first post
your secret was out!
Very Well Done.


Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

3 posted 2000-01-22 10:39 PM


This is beautiful, Jo! I lovely peek into your heart!  

Denise

whiskey
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since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278
Australia
4 posted 2000-01-22 11:36 PM


This is wonderful , so sweet what a precious heart you have  
Marilyn
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since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada
5 posted 2000-01-23 08:40 AM


Jo...this is lovely. I have been privalaged in my life to have experienced that secret place. I have to apologize to you for the last few weeks. I have withdrawn from many people dear to my life. When the darkness surrounds me, instead of reaching out, I tend to retreat. Next time I do that give me a kick in the pants would ya?  

Thankyou for reminding me of the comfort I do have in my life. ((HUG))


Martie
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6 posted 2000-01-23 11:37 AM


This is so sweet Grandma Jo and shows a big and beautiful heart.
hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
7 posted 2000-01-23 11:40 AM


And from what Marilyn tells me, you have a very big heart...room for all those her at passions and more  
Anne
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since 1999-12-31
Posts 78

8 posted 2000-01-23 01:11 PM


"There is a castle on a cloud.."
...except it's right here!  God bless you!  

Bad Boy
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since 2000-01-23
Posts 78

9 posted 2000-01-23 01:25 PM


It`s to bad there isn`t a place open to the public that is as warm and gentle as your heart.
Very sweet.




 The Devil Made Me Do It.


Rosemary J. Gwaltney
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 997
northern mountains, Idaho
10 posted 2000-01-23 02:49 PM


A beautiful, well-written, heartfelt poem!  You're a gifted poet.  You brought me tears of joy and sorrow.  What a wonderful person you must be!  Wish there were more.  But God gives those He loves, those secret places. I have one inside me too.

Munda
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since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands
11 posted 2000-01-23 03:08 PM


And what a beautiful heart you have ! Great poem  

Hey, Marilyn, next time darkness surrounds you, I don't mind kicking ya !  

[This message has been edited by Munda (edited 01-23-2000).]

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