Open Poetry #5 |
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Flown To Eternity |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments ![]() |
Moonlight softly shimmers Upon a distant sky The rose of youth does glimmer Within her ageless eyes. Innocence an empty dream Cold as silver breath But hidden life does gleam Shining from the grasp of death. Her soul once laid deflowered Hope nearly swept away But from a cloak of endless hours She has come to find her way. Within a tragic midnight A spirit of the past has rose A heart filled with ethereal light Now present to destroy her woes. Clothed in robes of purest white A phantom emersed in love Magnificent is this show of might From an eternity above. Upon painted meadows she exists Lost in the glory of forever Rewarded with angelic gifts Brought upon a silken feather. *Krista Knutson* ~*Like a lion, without fear of the howling pack, Like a gust of wind, ne'er trapped in a snare, Like a lotus blossom, ne'er sprinkled by water, Let me, like a unicorn, in solitude roam.*~ Hymn Of Buddha |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is beautiful, Krista! As usual! ![]() Denise |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Alwye ... WOWIE ! This is extremely lovely. Worth another read. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Krista...this poem emits such hope...simply beautiful ![]() |
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Dusk Treader
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since 1999-06-18
Posts 1187St. Paul, MN |
Wonderful writing, Krista. It's always a pleasure to read and enjoy your incredible works ![]() In flames I shall not be consumed, but reborn. -- Abrahm Simons |
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Dusk Treader
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since 1999-06-18
Posts 1187St. Paul, MN |
I'm boosting this one up so others can see your beautiful work ![]() In flames I shall not be consumed, but reborn. -- Abrahm Simons |
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One Who Understands Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 251Cedar Rapids, Iowa |
Very beautiful ![]() |
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whiskey![]()
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
This is wonderful Krista , As all your poems are ![]() |
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