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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Rhapsody My breath, catching fast In the clasp of his arms Somehow continued to deliver, Through miraculous means, The air, sweet and steaming, Flowing into my chest, love's river. Now I, surely dreaming, Could make not a move Nor quiet my heart from its thunder As I turned to him, willing, My lips full and yielding, Soft sanctuary, inviting his plunder. Though as he drew near, so His aching came clearer, yet His eyes filled with mindful regard, For he knew that his soul Would at last make mine whole. My lover, my poet, my bard. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Wow - beautiful... Flowing like rivers. Love it.  ...I am not a painter, I am a poet... F. O'Hara |
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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678 |
Very smooth and easy.....Has a relaxed feel to it....I like it. Very nice |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Very nice, indeed, Meadow..... |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Lovely poem has great flow |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
Very beautiful...I'm really enjoying your writing, Meadow It's not the love you fear, but the fall from the height~Edwin McCain |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
What a beautiful tribute to your someone special |
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Tamera Member
since 1999-12-28
Posts 121 |
Beautiful! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
This is wonderful Meadow. . . I love the imagery that you've used here. . . "My lover, my poet, my bard. . . " Beautiful words. . . Looking forward to seeing more. . . --------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Thank you, all, for your kind responses. Glad you enjoyed this. |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Meadowmuse - enjoying your work very much. Keep on writing. |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
These are beautiful words, and there's no doubt that whoever this poem was for feels pretty special too! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Meadowmuse, this is excellent. Any man would be proud to have this written about him. Very delicate and yet strong. I like it very much. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
A beautiful rhapsody! Denise |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
Beautiful!!! ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~ |
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