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the oddfellow |
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adam Junior Member
since 1999-12-28
Posts 10BFE |
when i was young, a fever gave rise. it changed forever, a young boy's eyes. when i looked in my window, i began to see. the truths of this, life manifest to me. as i watched the spiders play, in there ruthless, wicked way. a game they never win, and grow stronger from their sin. predator some may be but no-longer,living free. free from the tangled web,that made them, should it crumble, would enslave them. by Adam Clarke Roberts |
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Kevin Taylor Member
since 1999-12-23
Posts 185near Vancouver, BC, Canada |
Damn! Dark and thoughtful. I was drawn through it. Kevin |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
This piece captured me with its first two lines, actually, then kept me there. Quite strong, this sinister appeal. |
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Georgia Junior Member
since 1999-12-22
Posts 32 |
i have to tell you this is a neat concept on life...goes to show if you are not careful with what you do in life..like the spider..you can be caught in your own web! Am i right? |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
Deep, thought provoking, exquisite! ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~ |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Very deep, very intriguing, I like your style, rest assured, I will be looking for more from you. |
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