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In the Moonlight, Shadows Dancing... (Hoot's challenge)
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In the Moonlight, Shadows Dancing... (Hoot's challenge) |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
In the moonlight, shadows dancing, I gaze upon primrose entrancing, A single bloom on leafless stem, Satin beauty without blem. Glow of Luna's shimmering light, Bathes velvet petals in the night, Twelve dozen roses in golden urn, For one primrose would surely spurn. For in moon's light, as shadows dance, A yellow bloom, my heart entrance. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Oh, so lovely Mike. You are a flower child. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Magical and beautiful!-SEA  |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Love what you do with words Mike. Another beauty. (btw....no more sonnets ?) |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Oooh, Mike, this one's a keeper! Perfection in a poem! Corinne |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Mike- This is so lovely. Like having the florist delivering your thoughts. Somebody call the florist ! MARTIE ... that's YOU. ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Your words have made a beautiful bouquet! Very lovely, Mike!  Denise |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
A dazling boquet of words. Nicely done Mike...challange well met, thank you |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Thank you all for the gracious comments. Glad I passed hoot_owl_rn *smile* |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Reading this piece brings to life the shimmering moonlight and dancing shadows upon your cherished primrose. Beautifully crafted, Mike. Claire |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Appreciate the reply Claire... May you find a primose that is dancing in the shadows of the moonlight. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
So beautiful, a rose bathed in moonlight Enchanting verse Liz |
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simplyYRREHS Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 162 |
Very loving poetry....simply beautiful. "Heaven is under our feet as well as over our heads." ~Henry David Thoreau |
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