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The dreamers pallete
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The dreamers pallete |
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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa 
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Upon the ever gentle night, a dreamer lies with eyes closed tight, and paints a canvas of delight, with hues inside their mind. Through memories, their brush they grace, to paint themselves a better place. The days gone by that they embraced, but had to leave behind. And still some colors had to fade, the price of time, so costly paid. Decisions that nobody made but knew the consequence. And in the artists slow awake, a second for themselves they take to think of colors that they'll make in beauty of days hence. [This message has been edited by Kevin (edited 01-22-2000).] |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
This is a great poem, I love it !  |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Wonderful poem, Kevin! I like how it ended with a look toward the future! Denise |
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~ViXeN~ Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 93Guelph, Ont. Canada |
wow kev this is really beautiful! i love this |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kevin- You have splattered me with paint from your dreamers palette. I am in no hurry to wash it off. Wonderful images, my friend. Artistry from you in so many colors ... your palette is full. Love ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Kevin, this is another of your great style, but do I see a swing towards a more positive ending trend. Either way I love your poems. Parker |
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Anne Member
since 1999-12-31
Posts 78 |
Breathlessly beautiful! I loved this one! |
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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa |
thanks munda may you paint a masterpiece tonight d, the futures all i have vix, such colors come from you alone! wear em with pride marge =) haley, positive but brief anne breath its good for you =) |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
A colorful array of words |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
Kevin, You paint a lovely picture. JOY |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Kevin, you are growing into quite the poet! Keep writing! Corinne |
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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa |
hoot and joy, the metaphors continue! what have i done lol! corinne, so close yet so far away =) |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA |
I find your poetry very similar to my own. You have a great style and a fantastic imagination. Keep the ink flowing, Master |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Kevin, this is very well done. Your poetry is an inspiration. [This message has been edited by Martie (edited 01-23-2000).] |
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