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The Horizon
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The Horizon |
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G. A. Webb Member
since 2000-01-21
Posts 441Stanton, California, USA |
THE HORIZON The sea is yours the sky is mine Hand in hand we'll walk the line That brings the sunset and the dawn My love for you will linger on I am the sun and you are the tides A swift moving current is what our love rides The one thing between us is the green land Filled with beautiful flowers and beaches of sand You are the ocean and I am the moon Together we sing a sweet lovers tune That draws us two closer with each passing day And weaves us together in every which way You throw dolphins and whales that splash my cool air Gazing down upon you I can't help but to stare At your soft flowing waves that shimmer with light Waves that I always want to have in my sight I give you my love in the warm pouring rain You respond with a rainbow that serves to sustain The bond that's so powerful it has our hearts pinned Our love is forever I whisper with wind Together forever is what we will be With me as the sky and you as the sea Upon the horizon is where we will pet And share in our love to creat the sunset G.A. Webb [This message has been edited by G. A. Webb (edited 01-23-2000).] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful images! Very lovely! Denise |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
Such a beautiful poem...flowed very nicely too which makes for am good read! ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ Love is such a lonely art, and death is but a taste. Minds are merely instruments that often go to waste! ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
The images your words conjured in my mind and in my heart touched me. How beautiful! -SEA |
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G. A. Webb Member
since 2000-01-21
Posts 441Stanton, California, USA |
Thank you all for your kind words. I'm glad you liked it.  ) |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
G.A. Good one enjoyed the read. Nice flow, good words, good poem. |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Lovely imagery used here! And a sweet pouring out of love. Corinne |
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Anne Member
since 1999-12-31
Posts 78 |
"A bird and a fish may fall in love, but where will they live?" Evidently here! (Great poem! Wonderful images!) |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Such beautiful imagery my friend. Ocean themes are always a winner with me !  Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely. ~Isis~ (Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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tulip Member
since 1999-07-04
Posts 320unknown |
This is beautiful...hmm...I could stay here for a while! |
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