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G. A. Webb
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0 posted 2000-01-22 11:28 AM


THE HORIZON

The sea is yours the sky is mine
Hand in hand we'll walk the line
That brings the sunset and the dawn
My love for you will linger on

I am the sun and you are the tides
A swift moving current is what our love rides
The one thing between us is the green land
Filled with beautiful flowers and beaches of sand

You are the ocean and I am the moon
Together we sing a sweet lovers tune
That draws us two closer with each passing day
And weaves us together in every which way

You throw dolphins and whales that splash my cool air
Gazing down upon you I can't help but to stare
At your soft flowing waves that shimmer with light
Waves that I always want to have in my sight

I give you my love in the warm pouring rain
You respond with a rainbow that serves to sustain
The bond that's so powerful it has our hearts pinned
Our love is forever I whisper with wind

Together forever is what we will be
With me as the sky and you as the sea
Upon the horizon is where we will pet
And share in our love to creat the sunset

G.A. Webb


[This message has been edited by G. A. Webb (edited 01-23-2000).]

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Denise
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1 posted 2000-01-22 12:26 PM


Beautiful images! Very lovely!

Denise

Echo Rhayne
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2 posted 2000-01-22 01:45 PM


Such a beautiful poem...flowed very nicely too which makes for am good read!

 ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ Love is such a lonely art, and death is but a taste. Minds are merely instruments that often go to waste! ~*~ ^i^ ~*~



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The images your words conjured in my mind and in my heart touched me. How beautiful! -SEA
G. A. Webb
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4 posted 2000-01-22 04:37 PM


Thank you all for your kind words. I'm glad you liked it.  )
Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 2000-01-22 05:04 PM


G.A.
Good one enjoyed the read. Nice flow, good words, good poem.

Corinne
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6 posted 2000-01-22 07:27 PM


Lovely imagery used here!

And a sweet pouring out of love.


Corinne

Anne
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7 posted 2000-01-22 07:30 PM


"A bird and a fish may fall in love, but where will they live?"

Evidently here!

(Great poem!  Wonderful images!)

Isis
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8 posted 2000-01-22 08:23 PM


Such beautiful imagery my friend. Ocean themes are always a winner with me !  

 Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely.
~Isis~
(Sovereign of the Spirit)


tulip
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9 posted 2000-01-23 02:19 AM


This is beautiful...hmm...I could stay here for a while!  
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