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freeverse Junior Member
since 2000-01-22
Posts 14 |
You said you were in love with me. And that our love was meant to be. You stood by my side when I needed you. I thought for sure your love was true. What had gone wrong exactly ? One moment you were confessing your love to me, and the next you turned cold suddenly. Then you said we should see other people. Have you fallen for another girl ? I need to know how you really feel. I need to know if our love was real. But you just left without saying goodbye. you broke someone's heart and it was mine. Now I have to pick up the pieces by myself. While you are out having fun with someone else. How could you do this to me ? How could you throw away what we had so easily ? How could you .. |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
Very poignant and sad, and about feelings that many people can relate to. This has all happened to us at one time or another!  Welcome to Passions!! I look forward to seeing more from you. [This message has been edited by Satiate (edited 01-22-2000).] |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Welcome to passions  At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet. ~Plato |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to the family! Very sad poem here, but I sure can relate. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Welcome to Passions, Freeverse! Wonderful poem! Please check your email for a special welcome! Denise |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
Welcome to passions, sad poem and I too can relate! I hope to read some more soon! ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ Love is such a lonely art, and death is but a taste. Minds are merely instruments that often go to waste! ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I have one for you........ I cry each night when I go to bed just because good-bye was never said You just stoped calling without a single word If you said good-bye it was never heard I guess you silence was your way of good-bye it's too bad you didn't care enough to even try.-SEA I understand too well how you felt in this piece. Great writting!-SEA |
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freeverse Junior Member
since 2000-01-22
Posts 14 |
Dsnyder - thanks for that special greeting card. SEA - that's a good but sad poem you have there.I like the rhyme. And thanks to everyone for your warm welcome.. |
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Paul Hoekman Member
since 1999-12-28
Posts 382Harwinton Ct. U>S>A> |
A person who can bare there soul like this surely God has another soul he won't let you miss. |
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Bad Boy Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 78 |
Even I wouldn`t stoop that low.  Your better off without him. His loss. Good Luck  [This message has been edited by Bad Boy (edited 01-23-2000).] |
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