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From a Distance
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From a Distance |
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tori Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 520Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA |
From a distance- I saw a flicker in the sky Cellophane wings fluttering- against the pale moon lite And I was captured-On one enchanted night From a distance -I saw the light From a distance- I heard the music of the night In a symphony- it called to me- making everything so right In a distance -I saw the light Suddenly the stars appeared to me Dropped right down to be near to me Flickering and floating, tumbling down The flash of their brilliance flowed to the ground My heart skipped a beat without making a sound From a distance- I saw the light From a distance- the wind blew through my hair In a magical moment- it took me to the air And we danced close together on the milky way As we flew- closer to the sun Yet the light of the moon was our paradise In an instant- we became one From a distance- I saw the light Now I hold memories- like the treasures in the chest They will stay with me-until our time is blessed For one more ride on the caravan One more spin across the night For one more dance to the symphony And as its meant to be- we're one From a distance- I saw a flicker in the sky From a distance- I held the night © tori 2000 -------------- [This message has been edited by tori (edited 01-22-2000).] |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
Tori, this is beautiful! ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ Love is such a lonely art, and death is but a taste. Minds are merely instruments that often go to waste! ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ |
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One Who Understands Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 251Cedar Rapids, Iowa |
Beautiful and excellence all wrapped up into this one  Wonderful |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Really beautiful Tori |
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tori Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 520Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA |
Thanks Guy's ...  |
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Anne Member
since 1999-12-31
Posts 78 |
Magical piece! Well done! |
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tori Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 520Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA |
Thank you Anne.... |
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Altameria Junior Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 22Whitby, Ontario, Canada |
Wow that was totally inspiring. Simple yet powerful. Loved it. pattie [This message has been edited by Altameria (edited 01-23-2000).] |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
big SIGH!! Tori this was enchanting! Love that line From a distance! Reminds me of Bette Midlers song! |
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tori Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 520Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA |
Pattie thank you so much!! for one to find insperation in one's writing is the greatest complament given.. thank you ! Dove never thought about it.lol and her cd sits here with Rob Zombies...hehehe  |
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tulip Member
since 1999-07-04
Posts 320unknown |
Tori, this was beautiful...I hope we all have one more night of light!!! |
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