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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa 
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your love flows with the current and I am washed away the stream that in the past ran calm grows brisker with the day. I can not tread the water your heart too strongly calls and I know I can not help it as I’m plunging down the falls |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
WoW Kevin, deep. Short and to the point! I love the imagery in this one! ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ Love is such a lonely art, and death is but a taste. Minds are merely instruments that often go to waste! ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Another great one, Kevin! Lovely!  Denise |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Grinning like a cheshire cat here...oh Kevin, beautiful!! Me thinks you have been bitten my friend  At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet. ~Plato |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
You are one extrememly talented poet. I fully expect to see your name in print one of these days. I thoroughly enjoyed this one. Beautiful, flowing, exquisite rhythm and rhyme, crystal clear imagery; your words catch me and sweep me along in the white water of your emotion. I had lived three or four decades before the deep and painful emotions that had swept me along all my life, began to finally appear in my words, clearly and keenly. It took that long to find how to describe them like this! It was like discovering how to read invisible ink messages, after waiting a lifetime. ...Living is ever like crossing rivers; finding a new life on each shore ... RJG |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Very romantic, you young talent, and to think we have you all to ourselves!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
This is different, no saddness, please more Master Kevin. Parker |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Yes, I do believe you've been bitten Kevin. Absolutely lovely work. *Krista Knutson* ~*Like a lion, without fear of the howling pack, Like a gust of wind, ne'er trapped in a snare, Like a lotus blossom, ne'er sprinkled by water, Let me, like a unicorn, in solitude roam.*~ Hymn Of Buddha |
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~ViXeN~ Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 93Guelph, Ont. Canada |
kev, i love this one! =) its so beautiful! |
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