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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
I'm cold inside and all is numb, I try and yet the tears won't come. All fear is gone and feelings fled, Tis like inside I'm all but dead. In days gone by, held in firm grip, Emotions that the scales would tip. That I'd be lost within the flood, My tears were shed as if like blood. This numbness is a blessing, Yes? I wish I knew, what is your guess? What does it mean? Please, do you know? How do I let my feelings show? Am I insane? My mind has gone? How can I deal with pain so long? It drives me to the brink of death, And yet I take just one more breath. To dump this trash is what I must. Tell me the way before I bust! This is my plea, this is my woe, Please, tell me now which way to go. [This message has been edited by Marilyn (edited 01-20-2000).] |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I love your style! This poem is amazing! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
As well as this is written Marilyn, it makes me very sad  I wish I had the answers for you. All I can say is that I'm here for you and love you my friend.Hugs |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Marilyn, there's always only one way to go....up. Gee, sounds so easy doesn't it? Your poem is very sad. Hopefully there will be a happy one soon. |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
up up and away just click your heels together 3 times and say hookabooka or something like that Look! Up in the sky! It's a bird! It's a plane! NO, it'ssssssss SUPER MEL, Hmmm I think im a bit off tonight, oh well hehe *huggles* ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ Love is such a lonely art, and death is but a taste. Minds are merely instruments that often go to waste! ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ [This message has been edited by Echo Rhayne (edited 01-21-2000).] |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is so sad. Nope, you haven't lost your mind. I think it's just one of those stages we grow through.....and just think....you have all us wacky wonderful people here to cheer you on!!  Great poem, Marilyn! Denise |
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One Who Understands Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 251Cedar Rapids, Iowa |
That's a beautiful way to put your feelings  I hope you find direction... "When you don't know where to go or what to do...close your eyes and follow your heart." |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Marilyn.... I think we all have our own directions... I haven't found mine yet either... |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Beautifully written Marilyn, yet so very sad. *hugs* What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I can relate to this one so much! Great job, Marilyn. |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
I too can relate to this one, Marilyn. Deeply sad and wonderfully done. *Krista Knutson* ~*Like a lion, without fear of the howling pack, Like a gust of wind, ne'er trapped in a snare, Like a lotus blossom, ne'er sprinkled by water, Let me, like a unicorn, in solitude roam.*~ Hymn Of Buddha |
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