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La Luna Dream in Firmament
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La Luna Dream in Firmament |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California 
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La Luna Dream in Firmament A big thing happened to my encompassing windowed my view closed out confinement of house and chose front lawn and damp ground dodged the spreading elm to watch the sky whispered wonderment to cool grass fingers of the elm held the firmament late night of lace curtains hop-scotching pattern mirror my face moon made beautiful orb of light dream dancing on moonlit floor dress that swayed like grasses in wind leap twirl sparkler of light windowsill elbows bleached bones pointing away Front seat parking passion cityscape love so new these lips kissing a moonly thing betrayal and mourning longing light of time sky rained tears fixed and forever moving light eclipsed by a shadow encompassed and dreamed open onto this woman that thinks this morning dove does not in sun gladden but mourns the passing of the moon In the dew of little things, the heart finds its morning and is refreshed. (ee cummings) |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful moon, beautiful view! So lovely, Martie!  Denise |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
For some reason, poems about the moon stir a place inside my soul....lovely |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Tonight a complete luner eclipse and its cloudy  Denise--Thankyou for gazing at my view Ruth--The moon does have a way of stiring the soul. In the dew of little things, the heart finds its morning and is refreshed. (ee cummings) |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
There's only one difference between the moon and your poetry, Martie. The moon can be eclipsed  |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Through the clear skies I gazed in wonder at the eclipsing of the orb of the moon in it's fading red glory of light your awe and mine beams in unison with light being swept away for just one moment in time and in infinity peeks filling us with delight ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Balladeer--One thing that can eclipse my poetry (well many) and that's your reply. Marge--Wow! What a lovely graceful and absolutely beautiful reply! |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Beautiful poem Martie! You have great imagery on this one as well. Nathan |
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