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Lucie
Senior Member

since 1999-06-20

Posts 1077
Houston

0 posted 2000-01-20 04:45 PM

As familiar as a lovers touch
you caress my very soul.
You desire me to bow to you
my submission is your goal.

My emotions all belong to you
my eyes cry at your command.
Your a massive presence in my life
and you crush me with your hand.

Recognize the hold you have on me
and can call you by your name.
Though I do not tell my friends your here
to admit it brings me shame.

I will overcome your hold on me
And will fight you come what may.
For there’s a better day tomorrow
because I survived today.

With perseverance even the snail reached the Ark.

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

1 posted 2000-01-20 05:05 PM

Tomorrows always hold promise. Excellent poem, Lucie!

Denise

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

2 posted 2000-01-20 06:18 PM

Great message Lucie

devina
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since 1999-10-28

Posts 3539
Cali

3 posted 2000-01-20 06:20 PM

Sometimes the hold is only strong because we allow it or because it's comfortable, great poem Lucie!!!

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

fc
Member

since 2000-01-18

Posts 130

4 posted 2000-01-20 06:41 PM

wow with this, lucie, you write for more than just you...this touches me deeply

Corinne
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since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

5 posted 2000-01-20 06:41 PM

I have to agree with Devina on this!

It's a fascinating subject, though, sometimes desire to be loved overules our heads and what we know is right.

Nice poem!

Corinne

Lucie
Senior Member

since 1999-06-20

Posts 1077
Houston

6 posted 2000-01-20 07:01 PM

Thank you all for your replies.. do you know what it is I speak of?

Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

7 posted 2000-01-20 08:30 PM

This is powerful..some kind of addiction thing here..not a person though, I don't think...what holds you so tightly, Lucie?

Balladeer

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

8 posted 2000-01-20 10:52 PM

I agree with DeVine. It sounds like an addiction you are fighting. If so, I wish you the best. WE'VE MISSED YOU!!!!!

Lucie
Senior Member

since 1999-06-20

Posts 1077
Houston

9 posted 2000-01-21 12:12 PM

NANANA! your all wrong, its not an addiction but an affliction.

Nan

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

10 posted 2000-01-21 08:15 AM

Sometimes afflictions can be much more difficult to overcome than addictions.... You say a great deal here, Lucie...

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