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Broken heart |
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Ayla Member
since 1999-08-31
Posts 50 |
I fell in love with him when I was sixteen He was the most sincere man I've ever seen. Even though we were ten years apart. I still loved him with all my heart. On that beautiful day,out of the blue he said he felt the same way too. I felt like the happiest person on earth. who found her one and only true love. A young girl and an older man. The test of love can we withstand? I thought we could for I loved him so. Never imagined he would be the one to let go. It seems that he was lonely without a mate. Happened to run into me so we began to date. He felt in his heart that he had fallen for me. But his affections were nothing more than brotherly. I may be young,but I'm capable of loving. He really broke my heart when he left that evening. What's a girl to do with a broken heart ? It's not easy to make another start. I never knew that love could be so hard. I thought it means never having to part. The worst is when .. you are left with a broken heart ... Yesterday is history.Tomorrow is a mystery.Today is a Gift.That's why we call it The Present. - The Millennium Bug |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
My first love was alot older than me, and to this day, I thank him for letting me go and learn to be the woman I am now. It may hurt now, but eventually you'll see that it was better for you both. You never know- fate may step in later in life if he's the one that's really meant for you!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
Priscilla, so many poems about broken hearts, Marge still might have some band-aids lef tover though  no but seriously, this is touching, so many feelings! ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ Love is such a lonely art, and death is but a taste. Minds are merely instruments that often go to waste! ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Yes, love can break your heart and probably will again. Each time it will mend and be the stronger for it. Your poem is beautiful. Denise |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Broken hearts heal, they just take time  |
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