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I touched a dream
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I touched a dream |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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I touched a dream I've traveled to a thousand places, Seen about a million faces. But never has a face like yours, Appeared within these foreign shores. I've fantasied a million illusions, Dreamt about myriad conclusions. But never has a form like yours, Emerged from out these alien doors. And now beyond my wildest dreams, You stand there in the flesh it seems. And I am tongue tied beyond absurd For I cannot speak a single word. I would the flesh in touch rejoice, I would the sound of the spirits voice. I would break the spell of visions night And make it real, in the real of light. I would split the spell of visions strife. And treat my eyes, to the real of life. Before the ebb of hours drain, Before it dims, to truth again. Before it backs to the world of seem, Before it drifts again, to dream. |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
This is so beautiful Sy..... A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! Shannon |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
This one almost sings itself instead of being read  |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Sometimes to touch a dream would be heaven. Wonderful musings, Sy! Denise |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
Within such beautiful musings, I am enraptured. Wonderful work, thank you for sharing it with us!May I never be too busy to help another's load, Then I'll be drinking from the saucer 'cause my cup has overflowed. --Author Unknown |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
May your dream melt into reality soon hun, beautifully written! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Sy, What's to say that the coach will turn into a pumpkin. Perhaps your dream will come true. Dream on, dear poet, Love ya Liz |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
What IS another word for magic? Oh, yes, Sy! Sunshine Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Pepper, Almost as beautiful as you.*L* Sy Hoot, A wonderful comment. *L* Sy Denise, Thank you love, Sy Satiate, Thank you for the enraptured. Devina, Thank you for the beautiful. Elizabeth, It's to say the pumpkin will turn into an ivory tower. Love Sy Sunshine, Very sweet comment, thank you *L* Sy |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
A dream within a dream within With no beginning and with no end Where does it start This world apart That we live while we sleep Is it real The things we feel This other life we keep Could they be These worlds we see Only images to our mind Or is it true For me and you Another life entwined A world within a world within The veil of reality dreamily thin Where one lies down to take its end The other seeks a life within ----- Sir Tabin... I echo the thoughts of Lady Hoot and bow to your beautiful dream. |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
Excellent, Beautiful, Special. Trying to find words I guess I say it simple One of the best I have read Does that sound ok to you This certainly would be nice as a song The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Oh, my! I love this...very good work Sy! |
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moonmoon Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 277TX , USA |
Wow Seymour..I'm still in a trance ..(dreamy eyes..)..!!!! Thanks for the read. |
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~ViXeN~ Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 93Guelph, Ont. Canada |
this is really beautiful! i loved it! great job! shannon |
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tori Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 520Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA |
Beautifuly writen Sey, I enjoyed the read so much I read it twice! |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Who says dreams can't come true????...Nicely done, Sy... |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
not much to say as it has been said many times already. Stunningly beautiful |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
I repeat what the others say and may I say it twice, it's beautiful, beautiful! Nathan |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Andrew, Wonderful answer and poem, thank you. Helmut, Thank you for the wonderful answer. PoetdeVine, Thank you for the good work. Moon, Thanks for the WOW. Vixen, Thanks for the good job. Tori, Thanks for the second read. Nan, Thank you Nan for the nicely done. Spiked, Thanks for the stunning. Nate, Thank you Nate for the beautiful. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
I'm going to add another beautiful, masterpoet. You left me marvelling. K'Writing sharpens life; life enriches writing' Sylvia Plath |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Sy, have you been reading my mind? This is exactly how I felt when I met my Destiny. . . Are you going through a similar situation? Wonderful words Sy. . . going to keep this one. . . you are indeed gifted. . . --------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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