Open Poetry #5 |
Summer Romance |
Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
In my heart, it will always be a special summer. One so precious, I will always remember. The time we spent together, are treasures in the wind. Those memories, I'll always keep, for you touched me deep within. I did not know, at that time, into my life you would arrive. Though it was only for a short while, our dreams did come alive. The time came too quickly when we had to part. But, to each other we gave our hearts. I smile a little and remember the day We said good-bye and went our separate way. A parting kiss and a farewell smile, We wouldn't see each other for awhile. But time passed, and you did not return. And for those magical moments, my heart did yearn. Time and distance took its toll And left behind a broken soul. Things didn't turn out as we had planned. And I just couldn't understand. But I grew stronger as time went by. And now I believe, I can whisper good-bye. |
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tulip Member
since 1999-07-04
Posts 320unknown |
This is beautiful! |
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~ViXeN~ Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 93Guelph, Ont. Canada |
wow! i really felt this one... Time and Distance took its toll left behind a broken soul. I love it!!!!! |
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Paul Hoekman Member
since 1999-12-28
Posts 382Harwinton Ct. U>S>A> |
So many have been through this sort of thing, I know I have. And in the end all you can really do when your ready is whisper good bye. very nice! Earthman |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Very nice Eloise What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Time can cure a broken heart It may take a lifetime or only a month I loved this poem on summer love Every one has had one of those Liz |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Ah...time does cure all wounds doesn't it. Sad, but yet it shows strength. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very sad. I think most of us have been there. You have expressed my feelings exactly, Eloise! Wonderful poem! Denise |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Very nice, Eloise... Very nice, indeed... |
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