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vandana
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0 posted 2000-01-18 10:58 AM



Little remains now,
The rest was spent in one careless summer,
It is enough to put in to a song,
And shall sing to you,
Whispering to you
About the past left behind in the dark,

To risk in a game one evening,
and ulterly lose,
who laugh as they run,
And never look back,
Who blossom in a hour of unreasoning delight,

If you love me dearly,
I adore your love,
Best love I gave to you,
you'll notice
that the careless summer'll soon go away,
Not knowing
how time rolls time by,

The rest was spent in one careless summer,
what matters It If the hours pass
and the sun sets,
If the way is through,
come and hold my hand ,

you can know ,
how truely is your love to me,
Careless summer'll go quiclky,




[This message has been edited by vandana (edited 01-24-2000).]

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Danny Holloway
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since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK
1 posted 2000-01-18 12:09 PM


Haven't we all had "Careless Summers".  The best or worst is in the remembering.  Your poem caused me to remember.  Lessons to be learned!  Well done!
DH

Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

2 posted 2000-01-18 12:15 PM


Yep! brought back some memories for me as well!   Thanks, Vandana!

 Denise

And slight is the sting of his trouble
Whose winnings are less than his worth;
For he who is honest is noble,
Whatever his fortunes or birth.~~~Alice Cary, ~Nobility~


Justbleu
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since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
3 posted 2000-01-18 01:49 PM


There are times that I wish I could freeze and live for eternity!!  I enjoyed this a lot!!  

Take Care
Bridgette

Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269
Pennsylvania
4 posted 2000-01-18 02:52 PM


vandana,
Another lovely poem from your pen.
Did you get my last e-mail?
Liz

hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
5 posted 2000-01-18 03:01 PM


Very lovely words  
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