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Pooh-Butt New Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 8 |
If only i would have told you sooner, If only our hearts could have become one. but you had your life, and i had mine. If only our hearts were inline, But you were on your road and i was on mine. Our paths just crossed for a moment in time. Im glad they did, because you have a part of me. A part that is now free. Free to be your friend. All the way up until the end. |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
Your poem is interesting, and I enjoyed it. [This message has been edited by Rosemary J. Gwaltney (edited 01-18-2000).] |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
"Our paths just crossed for a moment in time". Great line! There is something special about that "moment", for those who are lucky enough to have them. The essence of your peom is significant and nice to read. DH |
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simplyYRREHS Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 162 |
Was this written for me? I think this applies so nicely to a situation very close to home. Enjoyed this thought process much.  Sherry"Heaven is under our feet as well as over our heads." ~Henry David Thoreau |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
How Bittersweet this seems to me...reminds me of some past memories!! Take Care Bridgette |
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