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kitkat
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since 2000-01-11
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0 posted 2000-01-18 01:04 AM


Show You Love Again

As I lie here alone in bed
I wonder why we never said
The things we feel deep down inside
Words unspoken from selfish pride.

You say you won’t ever love again
but give it a try-then begin
To feel the love I have for you
A love that is honest, one that is true

To confine your feeling of your heart
Will only cause pain from the start.
Open up and let me in
I can show you love again.

I know how you feel, I’ve been there
I understand I really care
I know there will come a day
When you won’t feel this way.

So now I’ll tell you how I feel
With emotion that is real
Oh “My Special Friend” I love you so
That’s how I feel, now you know

I don’t want to scare you, please do not run
I enjoy time with you it’s so much fun.
Open up and let me in
So I can show you “LOVE” again.

© Copyright 2000 Kathy Harmon - All Rights Reserved
bsquirrel
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1 posted 2000-01-18 01:23 AM


I like this -- it could easily be set to music. Don't scream "LOVE" at the end though. It is an emotion most powerful when whispered.  

Mike

Echo Rhayne
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since 1999-09-17
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2 posted 2000-01-18 04:21 AM


Beautiful!


 ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ Love is such a lonely art, and death is but a taste. Minds are merely instruments that often go to waste! ~*~ ^i^ ~*~



devina
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since 1999-10-28
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Cali
3 posted 2000-01-18 05:17 AM


I wish you the best of luck!!!  And if this person's worth it, they won't be runnin' anywhere

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

whiskey
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4 posted 2000-01-18 09:38 AM


This is wonderful , very nice , I wish you all the best  
hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05
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Glen Hope, PA USA
5 posted 2000-01-18 11:33 AM


very nice...reminds me of words spoken to me as of late ....I took the advice  
kitkat
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since 2000-01-11
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Nova Scotia
6 posted 2000-01-18 01:17 PM


Thanks all for your replys. I wrote this about 7 years ago. Unforunately we did not remain together. He did fall in love again with someone else and is married now. I am not scronful or anything like that. I am actually happy for him that he found someone to love in the way he could not love me.
Denise
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7 posted 2000-01-18 04:05 PM


This is beautiful, Kitkat! Very lovely!

 Denise

And slight is the sting of his trouble
Whose winnings are less than his worth;
For he who is honest is noble,
Whatever his fortunes or birth.~~~Alice Cary, ~Nobility~


Nan
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8 posted 2000-01-19 07:28 AM


...and so - the moral is... Never say never...
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