Open Poetry #5 |
Show You Love Again |
kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
Show You Love Again As I lie here alone in bed I wonder why we never said The things we feel deep down inside Words unspoken from selfish pride. You say you won’t ever love again but give it a try-then begin To feel the love I have for you A love that is honest, one that is true To confine your feeling of your heart Will only cause pain from the start. Open up and let me in I can show you love again. I know how you feel, I’ve been there I understand I really care I know there will come a day When you won’t feel this way. So now I’ll tell you how I feel With emotion that is real Oh “My Special Friend” I love you so That’s how I feel, now you know I don’t want to scare you, please do not run I enjoy time with you it’s so much fun. Open up and let me in So I can show you “LOVE” again. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
I like this -- it could easily be set to music. Don't scream "LOVE" at the end though. It is an emotion most powerful when whispered. Mike |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
Beautiful! ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ Love is such a lonely art, and death is but a taste. Minds are merely instruments that often go to waste! ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
I wish you the best of luck!!! And if this person's worth it, they won't be runnin' anywhere Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
This is wonderful , very nice , I wish you all the best |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
very nice...reminds me of words spoken to me as of late ....I took the advice |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
Thanks all for your replys. I wrote this about 7 years ago. Unforunately we did not remain together. He did fall in love again with someone else and is married now. I am not scronful or anything like that. I am actually happy for him that he found someone to love in the way he could not love me. |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is beautiful, Kitkat! Very lovely! Denise And slight is the sting of his trouble Whose winnings are less than his worth; For he who is honest is noble, Whatever his fortunes or birth.~~~Alice Cary, ~Nobility~ |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
...and so - the moral is... Never say never... |
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