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Lonesome Road
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rjdj New Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 2 |
Lonesome Road Two hearts, brought together by some unspeakable force We go thru life, to love one another Hand in hand we walk Thru the good and bad ~*~*~*~*~*~ After all that we've shared some things just don't quite work We go our separate ways To journey on the walk of life alone. ~*~*~*~*~*~ It's a lonely road we walk Wanting that one love we had Reaching out to the one we want, but only reaching into space. ~*~*~*~*~*~ The empty space of love How we long to fill it but to only fill it with more loneliness than ever. ~*~*~*~*~*~ We will walk this lonely road. Searching, yearning the only thing we desire. ~*~*~*~*~*~ To find the one thing that means the most ~*~*~*~*~*~ Love |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Very touching poem, welcome to passions!!!  Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Wonderful poem, J! You have expressed loneliness and the desire for love very beautifully! Welcome to Passions! Denise And slight is the sting of his trouble Whose winnings are less than his worth; For he who is honest is noble, Whatever his fortunes or birth.~~~Alice Cary, ~Nobility~ |
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rjdj New Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 2 |
devina & dsnyder Thank you for the reply, and the warm welcome to Passions I wrote this after a experience in my life, so it came from the heart. Once again, thank you for the warm welcome. |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
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You're welcome! I look forward to more from you! Denise And slight is the sting of his trouble Whose winnings are less than his worth; For he who is honest is noble, Whatever his fortunes or birth.~~~Alice Cary, ~Nobility~ |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
I myself am always searching for love....I really liked this poem....sometimes the road is lonely but are we ever truly alone?? Thank You and Welcome to Passions this is a wonderful place!! Take Care Bridgette |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Hello, I really enjoyed your poem. Especially the line, "searching, yearning, the only thing we desire". Isn't it amazing how hard and long we look, only to have someone value that special something less than we do. Welcome to passions! I new as well and will look forward to more poems from you. Danny |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Very nice poem rjdj. Welcome to Passions. |
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sandgrain Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662Sycamore, IL, USA |
Welcome to the wonderful world of caring hearts for poured out feelings. Love is the center of every life....the longing for, finding or loss of it. Your writing paints the emptiness and desire in the search so well. |
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Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Very nice work! Welcome to the family!  |
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