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Rus Bowden Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 139 |
Here's one I just wrote as a challenge activity at another forum. Five words were given to be used: Kraft dinner, pan-pipes, vermillion, noodles, and tupperware. Pan-Pipes Alone in a vermillion desert an old wind plays pan-pipes through dunes Doors closed to the city I helped build, cockroaches gather and die in wall lights in pealing hallway Kraft Dinner boxes, mold and noodles swim in faded tupperware here in someone else's silent kitchen Play a song in spring garden paths [This message has been edited by Rus Bowden (edited 01-17-2000).] |
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catslair Junior Member
since 2000-01-16
Posts 48 |
very clever indeed........ I am sure I would not have been able to come up with such a piece!!!!! |
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Anne Member
since 1999-12-31
Posts 78 |
What a cool poem! So vivid! Well done. |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Very cool!! I liked this one!! Take Care Bridgette |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Yikes! What a challenge that would have been! Kraft dinner?? Must say you work well under pressure, Rus!   Claire |
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Rus Bowden Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 139 |
hi catslair, thank you for your compliment. i read your poem from last night and i'm sure you would have come up with one. you're terrific. rus ------------------------------------ Hi Anne, Thanks for reading and your great reply. And also for your way cool reply to Adam and Kermit Much appreciated.Rus ------------------------------------- Hi Bridgette, So glad you like!! Thanks for the exclamation marks. You're very cool!! Rus ------------------------------------- Hi Claire, I never did one of these before, found it a fun challenge. Thanks for your compliment, mf. Yours, Rus |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
hehehehe...you did much better than I would have, Rus! I would have said....huh? You do work well under pressure!! Denise And slight is the sting of his trouble Whose winnings are less than his worth; For he who is honest is noble, Whatever his fortunes or birth.~~~Alice Cary, ~Nobility~ |
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