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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
SerenadeI heard you singing last night, sweet sojourner. Your voice followed into my sleep. It swirled just above my dreaming shape, stayed close as I slept, silently. When I am alone in my soul, sweet sojourner, slipping soundlessly from shadows surreal... your voice will still my uneven passage, my hesitant steps, as I heal.  Claire |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Claire, I am sure a fan of your poetry. This is wonderful. Liz |
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~ViXeN~ Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 93Guelph, Ont. Canada |
claire, well im new at this and i think this is the first one of your poems i read, but i think its wonderful and i look forward to reading many more of yours! shannon |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Claire- Very pretty indeed. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Exquisitely done, ma'am. |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Liz, Vixen, Marge, Balladeer...Thank you all, sincerely. I'm glad you found something to like in this. Love and shared peace, Claire |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
I can hear the song Need I say more Thank you The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
This is wonderful Clair I love your poetry  |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I love it.... What a peaceful time it is - being alone with your soul... don't ya think??? Very nice, Claire... |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Helmut...You seem to hear (and write) from the heart. Thank you. Whiskey...thank you. We're in mutual admiration, you know. Nan...yes, the peaceful soul times are to be cherished. Thank you, Nan. Claire |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
I too have been enjoying your poetry Claire and the replies that you make to other's poetry is wonderful. This is a sweet and sensitive poem. In the dew of little things, the heart finds its morning and is refreshed. (ee cummings) |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
You've chosen the perfect title for this piece! Beautiful, Claire! Denise And slight is the sting of his trouble Whose winnings are less than his worth; For he who is honest is noble, Whatever his fortunes or birth.~~~Alice Cary, ~Nobility~ |
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Astraea Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 378California! Yeah! Okay, I'm done now |
Lovely. Truly so. ~Astraea "Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness." "Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things." |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Kind of a wistful beauty this posesses, I believe...truly lovely work, Claire. *Krista Knutson* ~*Like a lion, without fear of the howling pack, Like a gust of wind, ne'er trapped in a snare, Like a lotus blossom, ne'er sprinkled by water, Let me, like a unicorn, in solitude roam.*~ Hymn Of Buddha |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Ah, so very lovely indeed.... Exquisite writing.... A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! Shannon |
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Rus Bowden Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 139 |
Hi Claire, Your first few lines drew me right into this marvelous piece. Wonderful. Rus |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Martie Denise Astraea Alwye Pepper Rus...thank you, one and all, for your kind and encouraging remarks. Writing with folks like you is such a pleasured experience. Claire |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Claire, what an extreamly beautiful piece this is. Like it's title, it basks in serenity. |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Exquisite work, Claire. Your words have a stilling effect of their own. Very beautiful. Michael |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Hoot Owl, Michael...thank you both. So glad you enjoyed this little poem. Claire |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
What a lovely piece this is! Corinne |
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