Open Poetry #5 |
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Delight |
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Skyfyre Senior Member
since 1999-08-15
Posts 1906Sitting in Michael's Lap ![]() |
Did ever there exist a person who Engendered such a perfect happiness, Like rarest buds come finally to bloom? In silken petals of the richest hue, Grown from a heart that lights the deepest gloom, Here framed is joy, in quiet tenderness. Transcendent flower, my delight is you. You cannot choose the way of your death, but the path you choose will determine its own end. |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
With so few words, To say so much so beautifully. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Short, beautiful and an acrostic! Very lovely, Kess!! Denise And slight is the sting of his trouble Whose winnings are less than his worth; For he who is honest is noble, Whatever his fortunes or birth.~~~Alice Cary, ~Nobility~ |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kess- I love acrostics ! This is well done. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Hmm... Looks pretty upbeat to me... ![]() |
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catslair Junior Member
since 2000-01-16
Posts 48 |
yes again kess i enjoyed it even more the second time around..... ![]() ![]() ![]() thanks again |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
I always am full of muchdelight,whenever I read something from you ![]() Wonderful acrostic Sweetie ![]() Jennifer Words bloom like flowers that seem astonished at being born. L. Pirandello 16th Century Dramatist |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Sky: I like this - a lot.. ![]() HUGS Don't ask me where I'm going, just listen when I'm gone and far away you'll hear me singing softly to the dawn. |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Your words speak for themselves, magical!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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