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Her presence
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
There was this one girl I saw at the Orland Arena who was raking up autographs from all the famous Orlando Magic players. Cindy Crawford didn't have anything on this girl. And that's why this poem is dedicated to that girl because she was flat out all that! Anyways, I hope y'll like the poem. The moment she walked in, her presence locked in. I've never seen a girl so beautiful before. On a scale of one to ten, I give her a twenty-four! With her creamy brown skin, that beautiful face, and that hour-glass figure, she had me feigning for her, like a bottle of liquor! Everyone in the room had their jaws dropped, as this girl shimmied around, with her silky halter top. I wanted to get with her real bad and I would give it all I had, to get her attention, so that I could dwell in her lovely dimension. Yes, her presence, is all in the beauty of essence. Baby got back and she's all that and more, that's why she's got me open like a sweat pore. If she was mine, I would treat her divine. She would never leave my side and she'll be there till the day I die. And even when I die, she'll still be mine because eventually, I'll see her in heaven. And once again, our love will ring hearts and roses, with a smile of encouragement from God, and a heart-touching comment from Moses. Nathan |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
She really got your attention, huh, Nate!!?  Great poem!! Denise And slight is the sting of his trouble Whose winnings are less than his worth; For he who is honest is noble, Whatever his fortunes or birth.~~~Alice Cary, ~Nobility~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nate, She got your attention and you got my attention. Enjoyed the read. |
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Rus Bowden Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 139 |
Hi Nate, A whole life and eternity with a woman only seen. Ah, how can women do this? Rus |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Ah, the mystery of woman. Nate, this is just wonderful. Guess you'll go back to the O-Rena, huh? Now ... that's MAGIC !  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Sounds like you got it real bad Nate...Me thinks you should find her and GET IT ON!!!G* Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
I agree with devina, You should go find her and get you some  Great poem |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Hmmmm, Reminds me of Raffaello Benelli, Maybe it's his sister Liz |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Hmmm...certainly made an impression did she |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
She caught your eye you can't deny you want to try to get her I'll take a shot but hope its not just what she's got on the outside You never know its funny though what if it was Toe in drag OK so that was MAJORLY korny but who cares LoL, great poem! ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ Love is such a lonely art, and death is but a taste. Minds are merely instruments that often go to waste! ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Thank you Dysnder for the nice comment. Thank you Seymour for the nice comment. Thank you Rus for the nice comment. Hey Rus, I guess I just let my imagination run away. Hey Marge, you darn right it's magic. Hey Devina, I agree wholeheartedly and thanks for the post. The same for you too Devina and thanks for the post. Thanks Liz, for the post. Thank you Hoot, for the post. Thank you for the funny post, Echo! I knew that it couldn't be Toerag because Toerag is a guy. I admit that I didn't know if he was a guy or not until one of the fellow poets told me. Thank you all for responding to the poem. I admit that I'm shocked over all the posts that I got though. Nathan |
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