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gary marshall New Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 4Nottingham.UK |
She is the woman i married, the woman i adore, Why did she act like a cheap little whore. Lies and deception, kept her secrets unknown, Her closest friend was her mobile phone. They conversed on the computer, had sex in our bed, Told friends all about it, but nothing was said. To think that she touched him and that he took my wife, Makes me feel inadequate and sick of my life. I could kill him? that would just cause me more pain, But thinking about him just drives me insane!! He has soiled my wife, she has destroyed my trust, Because of their greed for bodily lust. Now that its over, in our bed she now lies, She says she is sorry..well what a surprise!! I hope that she means it and im not being naive, When she says that she loves me then will i believe? She is my friend and i need her for the rest of my life, But one chance is all, i will give to my wife. |
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Terri Madrid New Member
since 2000-01-15
Posts 8 |
such pain and anger, i only hope your next poem will be a poem of forgiveness |
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Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA |
Oh, the betrayal by the ones we love. Hope you work it out to your satisfaction. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This can't be an easy situation. I think marriage counseling is badly needed to help towards healing and forgiveness. Denise And slight is the sting of his trouble Whose winnings are less than his worth; For he who is honest is noble, Whatever his fortunes or birth.~~~Alice Cary, ~Nobility~ |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
You're stronger than any man I've ever known dear, keep with it if that's what you really need- But always remember that love doesn't HAVE to hurt! HUGS  Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Astraea Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 378California! Yeah! Okay, I'm done now |
Oh dear...such a sad, angry poem, and yet a little bit of hesitant hope too. Lovely, and truly so. ~Astraea "Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness." "Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things." |
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simplyYRREHS Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 162 |
well versed. to forgive is always easier to forget, just remember that if you are to make it work, you have to put the past to rest. luck to you! sherry |
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Anne Member
since 1999-12-31
Posts 78 |
How bitter betrayal is! I feel your pain. May your poetry and the empathy of your readers bring you comfort. |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
I hope you are able to find forgiveness and comfort!! It is painful to be betrayed, cuz, you not only know the other did something not right but you may feel inadequate and wonder what did you do to make the one you love betray you!! I hope you find peace!! God Bless and Take Care Bridgette |
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