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vandana
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0 posted 2000-01-16 11:44 AM



My eyes 've lost their sleep in watching,
Yet, If I do not meet thee,
Still It Is sweet to watch the moon,
My heart has given the love someone I love,
My heart sits in the shadow of the rain,
Waiting for the love,
They walk away ,
in their different paths,
Leaving me behind,


If I am alone still ,
It is  sweet to listen ,
For the footstep of yours,
To come to me,
Asking ,e If there is still hope
For both of us to love,


I know that in return
for the treasure of the great worlds 'll,
Receive from me one little love
In the morning ,
When my heart awakes for you,


My dear,
I pray one morning light,
When the far and the near
Will kiss eachother,
And death and life'll be one in love,

My heart It brightens the light of the sun,
My love,
The shadow will end for good,
Do not cry,
For the love,
We didn't care that time,

When there was still hope between us,
The shadow'll end for good,
The sadness in the heart 'll fade away,
As the sun and the darkness'll be lifted
from my soul it'll bring us smile back again,



© Copyright 2000 vandana - All Rights Reserved
Nate Dogg
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since 1999-11-15
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Georgia, Fulton
1 posted 2000-01-16 03:05 PM


Beautiful poem!

 Nathan

Denise
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2 posted 2000-01-16 03:23 PM


Lovely sentiments, Vandana!

 Denise

And slight is the sting of his trouble
Whose winnings are less than his worth;
For he who is honest is noble,
Whatever his fortunes or birth.~~~Alice Cary, ~Nobility~


Mike
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since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462

3 posted 2000-01-16 03:52 PM


Nice one Vandana... good job...
Elizabeth Santos
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since 1999-11-08
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Pennsylvania
4 posted 2000-01-16 05:03 PM


vandana, This is a beautiful poem, and intriguing visions, I was taken with this one. Please check your e-mail
Liz

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