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JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2000-01-16 05:40 AM

My sweet princess

A fair maiden decided she would meditate and write
in her little Zen cabin built in Hawaii's warm sunlight.
She knew that on those hot and humid days
a swim with the dolphins would be so refreshing and cool,
so after tending her garden full of fresh corn, herbs and pea's,
she soon immersed herself in the warm salty sea.
The swim was so refreshing she thought of a friend that she knew
who lived close by on the island of Oahu.
He was her Priest and she was his Goddess,
and together they had discovered a place,
that only existed within their shared warm touch and tender embrace.
Touch me my sweet princess and be sensual for me
and build up my desire for soon we will share life's sweet mysteries.

Jameslee@Sept1999@formysweetprincess

Rus Bowden
Member

since 2000-01-13

Posts 139

1 posted 2000-01-16 01:51 PM

Hi James,

Well here's a verse that takes me to Hawaii and away to goddesses and dolphins at just the right time of the year. Such a wonderful, fanciful muse of love.

Rus

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2000-01-16 02:03 PM

James-
Very sensually romantic.
Kind of goes with those 'massages'
doesn't it?

~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Nate Dogg
Senior Member

since 1999-11-15

Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton

3 posted 2000-01-16 02:56 PM

Nice story you've told here. I like happy endings.

Nathan

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2000-01-16 06:20 PM

Thank you Rus, Marge, and Nate for reading my poem and the nice comments. Rus I'm glad you could feel the aloha of Hawaii when you read this. Marge you are the first one that made a comment that you found this romantic. I posted this on another web site and some thought it was sweet but I wrote it in a romantic mood...so I'm really happy you felt that mood. My sweet princess lives on the big island of Hawaii and yes she did get her sensual massage. James

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

5 posted 2000-01-16 08:02 PM

Romantic and beautiful, James! Lovely!

Denise

And slight is the sting of his trouble
Whose winnings are less than his worth;
For he who is honest is noble,
Whatever his fortunes or birth.~~~Alice Cary, ~Nobility~

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2000-01-19 06:20 AM

Thank you Denise for seeing romance and beauty in this poem. James

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

7 posted 2000-01-19 07:48 AM

Jim...I like the feel of this one, sensual yet romantic....I can feel the longing very clearly in it.

Justbleu
Member Elite

since 1999-08-31

Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)

8 posted 2000-01-20 01:44 AM

The images you created for me were sooo very warm....refreshing...and very very romantic!! I loved this!!!

Take Care
Bridgette

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

9 posted 2000-01-20 09:23 AM

You women are really nice. Thank you Hoot Owl for your wonderful comments and thank you Bridgette its nice to be appreciated. James.

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