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Lynn Burdette
Junior Member

since 1999-11-23

Posts 25
Greensboro, Georgia ( I'm a Georgia peach!)

0 posted 2000-01-15 09:54 PM

I Dream Of The Day
by: Lynn Burdette

I dream of the day when we unite,
The love between us will shine so bright.
Our souls will finally rest in their place.
In the arms of each others warm embrace.

I dream of the day when we visit the mountains,
we'll sit and watch the beautiful fountains.
The stars in the sky will twinkle above
as we kiss by the moonlight releasing our love.

I dream of the day we walk the beach,
arm and arm as far as we can reach.
The passion within us flies free as a dove.
Our souls come together as we make-love.

I dream of the day when we dance again,
love in our eyes as we begin.
The slow, sweet movement that we make.
The smile on our face a we dance by the lake.

I dream of the day our love will be free.
Free to be released for everyone to see.
These days will be soon, I promise you this.
I will seal up my dreams with our starting kiss.

Lynn Burdette

John Yaws
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since 1999-10-09

Posts 860
Texas

1 posted 2000-01-15 09:58 PM

Beautiful. Welcome aboard. he's a lucky guy.

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Astraea
Member

since 1999-11-09

Posts 378
California! Yeah! Okay, I'm done now

2 posted 2000-01-15 10:02 PM

Lovely poem. Very nice.

~Astraea

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Paul Hoekman
Member

since 1999-12-28

Posts 382
Harwinton Ct. U>S>A>

3 posted 2000-01-15 10:36 PM

CONSISTENT QUALITY
very nice
try to spread them out
it will spread out your fun!

Nan

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

4 posted 2000-01-16 09:01 AM

A lovely dream indeed - Keep 'em coming, Lynn..

Nate Dogg
Senior Member

since 1999-11-15

Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton

5 posted 2000-01-16 03:00 PM

Beautiful poem and welcome to Passions!

Nathan

Denise

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since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

6 posted 2000-01-16 08:17 PM

Oh, Lynn, this is so beautiful! Well done!

Denise

And slight is the sting of his trouble
Whose winnings are less than his worth;
For he who is honest is noble,
Whatever his fortunes or birth.~~~Alice Cary, ~Nobility~

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

7 posted 2000-01-16 09:46 PM

I like your style, Lynn.
It 'sings'.
Lovely.
~*Marge*~

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