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I Want A Love Like This
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I Want A Love Like This |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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I Want A Love Like This ~Marge Tindal~ 2000 I want a love that embraces my soul ~*~ that leaves me breathless ~*~ A love that opens windows and breathes through the years. ~*~ A love that sets me free to be me ~*~ A love that I can give that comes back to me ~*~ A love that stays when others have gone ~*~ A love beyond my wildest dreams ~*~ A love of sure recognition at first glance ~*~ A love of steady measure A love that is my greatest treasure ~*~ A love who knows what my sighs are all about A love that says in a look what others say with words ~*~ A love just like you have given me ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Marge, sounds like you've found it. I've found mine...and it WAS at first sight... Sunshine Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
A love like this is made more lovely by your discription. In the dew of little things, the heart finds its morning and is refreshed. (ee cummings) |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
But Marge what is all that fuzz All what you wished I thought you have this all with us  Just Kidding I could not say Because I meant it that way But yes there should be one Who you can love all by yourself...and then some Seriously This is an inspiring piece you wrote there And happy are those who have such love The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
If I could just fill my name in at the top of this poem it would fit like a glove...except for those last five lines darnit. A long time ago in a far away country I wrote a poem titled "What does Gina want" and I wrote six lines describing all the things that I wanted from Gina you know like kissing and hugging and spending the night together and in the 7th line I suddenly realized hey wait a minute...what does gina want. And you know what...it wasn't exactly me. However I did enjoy the time we have spent together and the opportunity. Oh, I noticed in the last five lines your Love was fulfilled...so enjoy, enjoy, enjoy. James |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sunshine- I'm happy for you, dear. Me? Always looking.  Martie- Love is so beautifully worn by lovers, is it not? Thanks for liking it. Helmut Becker- Yes, loving is special. Lucky are those who have love to wear. And the rest of us are out shopping ! James- I write of love in the way I'd like it to fit. Whenever it has ... I've loved being in it. And when it hasn't, I've loved the opportunity anyway. Love is always open to interpretation. Love lives in my heart ... opportunities are what we make of them. Thanks for enjoying ... hey, Gina may not have fit .... but at least you enjoyed the encounter. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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stephen j Junior Member
since 2000-01-15
Posts 21 |
LOOK THIS IS STEPHEN AND I TOLD EVERY ONE ABOUT YOUR IDEA ON THE LOVE POEMS THANKS |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
...and there's nothing wrong with wanting all of that... I really love this one... awesome!! |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Anyway to clone this love? I want a clone of a love like this! Great poem! Corinne |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Stephen J- Okay ... just slow down a little bit, okay? Respond to some others poetry for the evening. Get a feel for what others write. Have a wonderful evening. ~*Marge*~ Nan- Thanks, hon. You're right .. nothing at all wrong with wanting it all. And giving it all in return. Corrine- Honey, if we come up with a clone of this ... we'll need one for all us gals ! LOL ! But, wouldn't it be wonderful ! Love ~Marge~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Marge, I really love this,Oh" I want a love that embraces my soul" wow, I want that too !! What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Marge , This is wonderful , I hope your love lasts forever Good luck [This message has been edited by whiskey (edited 01-15-2000).] |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Hey, Marge, I'll tell you what I'll do I'll give that special love to you. I'll do my best to be a charmer, Be your knight in shining armor, Give you love the whole night through. Dear Marge, that's what I'll do for you. Hey, Marge, if you give me a chance I'll fill your life with sweet romance. I'll put you on a pedestal, Be there to catch you if you fall, Make you smile with ballyhoo. Oh, Marge, I'll do these things for you. Dear Marge, this is what I will do. Each day I'll make our love renew. I'll take away your pain and stress, Eliminate all emptiness And open Heaven to your view... OOPS! er, my girlfriend says to say hi, too  |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is so beautiful, Marge! Sounds like the perfect love!!! ROFL@ Balladeer!! Denise And slight is the sting of his trouble Whose winnings are less than his worth; For he who is honest is noble, Whatever his fortunes or birth.~~~Alice Cary, ~Nobility~ |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
You've described a universal yearning, and so beautifully Liz |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DarkAngel - I hope you find yours too. Whiskey- I'm glad you liked it, hon. Would but all love lasted forever. Denise- Would be perfect, huh? Balladeer is in HOT WATER ! Elizabeth, my friend- Universally speaking ... is universally seeking. ~Marge~~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Balladeer- You've broken my heart in little pieces ... always promising ... always teasing. Just when you get my hopes a'quiver .. you run for cover ... and don't deliver. Someday you'll regret throwing me a little token - You'll want my loving but I'll call ORKIN ! *sniff* *boo-hoo* *sob*  ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Astraea Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 378California! Yeah! Okay, I'm done now |
Lovely poem! ~Astraea "Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness." "Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things." |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Gee, if you don't get my loving token You say that you'll go to Orkin And. if I make my girl an ex She said she'll call Terminex! I'm beat so much I feel swollen. I guess that I'll call Truly Nolen! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Astraea- Thanks ... I'm glad you enjoyed it. *Balladeer- Well, Truly Nolen just won't do. And Orkin kind of just sucks too. I'll hold off on Terminex if you ever become an EX ! I like the idea of seeing you in 'shining armor' WAHOO ! So, Mister tell you what we'll do ... if 'she' is ever through with you. I'll take you up on your proposition ... and surrender my heart in sweet submission. I'll share with you the pedestal ... so we'll be even after all. Now for your 'swollen' parts ... I recommend you finish something ... that you start ! ! ! !  ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Rus Bowden Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 139 |
Hi Marge, I must tell you what a treat this was to read as I scrolled, looking forward to each upcoming verse. So nice, big smile love it!Rus |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Why, thank you, Rus. What a very nice thing for you to say. It appears that you are certainly enjoying your trip through the Passion's of poetry ... we are a wonderful group of friends here. You've sure received oodles of replies on your first post. Remarkable. I've gone back and read the replies ... great. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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SnglDad Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 115Seattle area |
The world would be a lot nicer place if you could bottle a love like that and give it to everyone. Im sure if he`s read this he`s thanking God for allowing him to have such a Special Woman to share his love with. Best of luck for many years to come. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Awesome! Reading this poem is like reading several (hundred) mini-poems, or being shown flashcards on romance. How'd you do that? Mike |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Joel- I almost missed your response as I quit receiving e-mail notices on it for some strange reason. Thank you so much for your comments. This is the epitome of what love should be like. Glad you enjoyed it. Mike- Thanks for the terrific comment. Gosh .. 'flash cards' on romance ... I hadn't thought of that. But, what a great idea ! So pleased that you found it appealing. I really enjoy the 'artistry' of the formats that Passion's has given us to use. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Ah...could we all be so lucky |
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Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA |
This is what I want too. Great job at putting it into words! It matters not how strait the gate; How charged with punishments the scroll; I am the master of my fate: I am the captain of my soul. --W.E. Henley |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LOL ! When I need a laughing fit ... I head for the Archives of PiP ... Balladeer, if you're reading this ... when I stop  you deserve another  Folks~ In order 'get it' ... ya' just gotta read ALL the replies~ OMG !! I needed a *giggle-schmiggle* and found it~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Marie777 Member
since 2007-01-30
Posts 93MI. |
Sounds like you have found the love of your life. Hold on tight. Hugs, |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Marge and Balladeer. Precious. |
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