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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia 
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" Lost inside " Outside I cry My heart does die Inside my cell For you I fell Lost to me Inside I see You I want Love to taunt Deep within A frowning grin No you no me No things to be No way to know No words to show Just loss of mind In time ill find |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
This is yet another beautiful poem! I like it a lot! ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~ |
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Astraea Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 378California! Yeah! Okay, I'm done now |
Simple, to the point, and very beautiful. ~Astraea "Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness." "Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things." |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very nice, whiskey!  Denise |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Thanks to everyone |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
I'm trying to catch up on what I missed while I was away..and glad I found this one. Like it much, I do It's not the love you fear, but the fall from the height~Edwin McCain |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Very beautiful, I enjoyed this a lot.  *Krista Knutson* ~*Like a lion, without fear of the howling pack, Like a gust of wind, ne'er trapped in a snare, Like a lotus blossom, ne'er sprinkled by water, Let me, like a unicorn, in solitude roam.*~ Hymn Of Buddha |
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highwayman Junior Member
since 1999-12-29
Posts 42Cookeville, Tennessee, usa |
I think this is the first time I've seen this one. Nice |
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