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Enotneicna
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Oakland, Or, USA

0 posted 2000-01-15 03:56 AM



Young, naive and inexperienced,
never even been kissed.
Our eyes met,
you touched my hand.
My heart seemed to swell,
as if to burst.
You gave a smile,
which I returned.
When we danced,
you held me close.
Whispers in my ear,
that sent shivers to my toes.
And when our dance was done,
reluctantly released me.
We sat and talked the hours away,
watched the stars;
Heard the wind in the trees.
And when our evening ended,
Your kiss nearly stole my breath away.


 Words are my medicine.
Read and live and love and heal!



© Copyright 2000 Sharon Lee Wilcox (Enotneicna) - All Rights Reserved
amber
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los banos, ca,
1 posted 2000-01-15 04:22 AM


I wish i could tell you how wonderful my first expierence was. This poem expresses that emotion beautifully. You have a wonderful way with recollecting the memories here, thanks for that glimpse into my own past.
whiskey
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2 posted 2000-01-15 11:15 AM


This is so sweet , that first kiss is a doosie   you have expressed that feeling well , great poem  
RainbowGirl
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3 posted 2000-01-17 01:29 PM


I don't think my first one was like this but I wish it had been..

HUGS

 Don't ask me where I'm going, just listen when I'm gone and far away you'll hear me singing softly to the dawn.


devina
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Cali
4 posted 2000-01-17 01:34 PM


If I can remember right, my first kiss was shy and a little akward...G*  I'm glad yours was such an experience hun!!!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

Enotneicna
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5 posted 2000-01-17 02:56 PM


Thank you all.........that first kiss also stole my heart......we've been married for 29 years......and his kiss can still take my breath away.

 Words are my medicine.
Read and live and love and heal!



Justbleu
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Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
6 posted 2000-01-17 03:01 PM


This made me cry....so few find a love that touches once and lasts sooo very long!!  I am so happy for you!!  For you are truly blessed!!!  

Take Care
Bridgette

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7 posted 2000-01-17 08:34 PM


Beautiful..especially knowing your love has lasted so long.... good one!
Denise
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8 posted 2000-01-17 08:58 PM


Wow! That's wonderful! A love to last for a lifetime...guess that first kiss said it all! : Beautiful poem!

 Denise

And slight is the sting of his trouble
Whose winnings are less than his worth;
For he who is honest is noble,
Whatever his fortunes or birth.~~~Alice Cary, ~Nobility~


Enotneicna
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9 posted 2000-01-19 02:05 AM


Again, thank you.  A friend told me once that my halfside and I are the one constant in her life.......the one thing she knows will never change.  He is my halfside.....he completes me and I him.......we do know we have been very blessed.

 Words are my medicine.
Read and live and love and heal!



hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05
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Glen Hope, PA USA
10 posted 2000-01-19 02:11 AM


Oh my, there is nothing as beautiful as sweet, innocent love  
SnglDad
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since 2000-01-08
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Seattle area
11 posted 2000-01-19 02:36 AM


I can`t remember my first kiss but Im sure
it wasn`t anything like that.
Very sweet  
Thanx For Sharing And God Bless

                              Joel

Sonny
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since 1999-12-18
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Schenectady, NY, USA
12 posted 2000-01-19 05:50 PM


I also wish my first kiss could've been as magical as yours.  It's kind of hard to accomplish when your entire family is watching you from the front door, however...  You are an inspiration to have found true love with your very first kiss!

Sonny

Paul Hoekman
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13 posted 2000-01-19 11:59 PM


        



[This message has been edited by Paul Hoekman (edited 01-20-2000).]

~ViXeN~
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since 2000-01-09
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Guelph, Ont. Canada
14 posted 2000-01-20 12:22 PM


i too wish my first kiss felt like that =)
its amazing that you can recapture something so special so well after all that time =)

Eloise
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Wyoming
15 posted 2000-01-20 12:30 PM


Sounds like you have a very special one.  Beautiful poem.  
Dark Angel
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16 posted 2000-01-20 04:12 AM


Beautiful, I too wish my first kiss was like that

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge



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